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for Velveteen

by LCP

person gss
schedule December 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good story. very interesting to read, and you stayed within the personalities of the characters while also giving them some liberties. nice work.
person XxSangoxX AKA Heathe
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Nicely done... check some of the spelling and context words though,

LOVELY!
person Watereana
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it ^_^
person darkrobin
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very nice. very well done.
person Mr. Pants
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Well, that was certainly interesting. But, I am really envious of Sango's countless orgasms!! Is that even really possible? I don't think your body could handle that so many times. After the second orgasm, it starts to kind of hurt. Oh well, it is fiction after all. Crappy, unrealistic (countless orgasm!!) fiction, but fiction none-the-less.
schedule November 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! I love the Miroku/Sango pairing!
person Enkaiame Katana
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was such a good story. I've been trying to find sweet MirokuSango stories and you wrote one. It makes me very happy. Write another one please.
person MARY
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I REALLY LIKE THIS STORY. PLEASE WRITE SOME MORE STORIES.
person chibi_sanoku105
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW..... That much love-making in one night?? Is that healthy??? LOL.
Great story, maybe you should consider on writing a sequel??
person sorshawillow
schedule September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh my...that was nice! *fans self* Nice and Hot!