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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
weeeeee i love this story although the alteration thing kind of confused me at first...update asap!!!!
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November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great story!!
I like both pairings, and deciding to pick a sci-fi theme, although strange at first, fits really well....
Please, please, please keep updating! I can't wait for your next chapter!!
I like both pairings, and deciding to pick a sci-fi theme, although strange at first, fits really well....
Please, please, please keep updating! I can't wait for your next chapter!!
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yay, an update! Nice work--Inuyasha barging in on Kouga in Sango's bed was hilarious! Keep up the good work, and please update soon!
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October 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great job! I really do like how you're building your plot and characters, and I'm interested to see what avenues you'll take with this. Nicely done, I can't wait to see more!
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October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I sadly don't have the time to read every chapter right now, but holy cow this story is amazingly inventive. The description is so detailed that I feel each sentence rather than read it. The darkness is palpable, and the suspense is already straining to a fever-pitch, and this is all in the first chapter!! I can't wait until this busy weekend is over and I can sit down and read this story in its entirety. Great stuff so far!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like how this is progressing, and I'm anxious to see more. You have a real command of the language, and your imagery is stunning. Very well written--excellent work! I'm not typically a fan of the Sango/Kouga pairing, but you've set this one up so well that I can't wait to see where you'll take it. Please update soon!
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ha-hey! I get the first review!
First of all, I cannot understand why this fic would garner a rating of anything less than the full five stars; a tepid, four star rating for such a well-written first chapter is a simply inexcusable offense. This is the author of "The Price of Vengeance", people; don't screw around!
I chuckled a bit at the summary for your story; Sango's creation as a weapon, the erasure of her memory, and her manipulation by other, shady figures with which to further their own ambitions - this is almost exactly the same angle I was going to shoot for when I got around to introducing the Dragonball Z character Juunanagou (Number Seventeen) into my fic. I am cool with it, though; the similarities end just about there, as my story will be as canon as possible. Heck, the summary could work just as well for Kagura as for Juunanagou, so great minds think alike, eh?
Anyhow, I am seeing great amounts of action, clean detail, and thoughtful dialogue already, and the immediate influx of OCs suggests that the plot will be rather complex. Four stars? B.S.! Five stars for you from me!
First of all, I cannot understand why this fic would garner a rating of anything less than the full five stars; a tepid, four star rating for such a well-written first chapter is a simply inexcusable offense. This is the author of "The Price of Vengeance", people; don't screw around!
I chuckled a bit at the summary for your story; Sango's creation as a weapon, the erasure of her memory, and her manipulation by other, shady figures with which to further their own ambitions - this is almost exactly the same angle I was going to shoot for when I got around to introducing the Dragonball Z character Juunanagou (Number Seventeen) into my fic. I am cool with it, though; the similarities end just about there, as my story will be as canon as possible. Heck, the summary could work just as well for Kagura as for Juunanagou, so great minds think alike, eh?
Anyhow, I am seeing great amounts of action, clean detail, and thoughtful dialogue already, and the immediate influx of OCs suggests that the plot will be rather complex. Four stars? B.S.! Five stars for you from me!