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I really love this story, you have me on pins and needles to know how everything pans out! Please continue!,

Update! What are you waiting for?! That thing you call a life? Psht. As if. School? Yeah, right. Work? Whatever. Significant other\spouse. Dime a dozen. All those reasons are excuses, so get up and get to writing! :p

Nice to see you back!

Great new chapter, I just wish that the plot wasn't still expanding, it's getting a little difficult to keep tabs on......

But, as long as those ties start coming back together, it'll turn out great!

Keep the chapters coming, and never give up writing! ^_^

Thank you so much for the updated chapter!!!!!!!!! I loved it!!!!! Please update again when you can. This is a great story!!!!!!!!!!! Thanks for writing it!!!!!!!!!You're great!!!!!!!!!!!

Yay! So glad to see you've updated! And, I'm glad to see Miroku make an appearance, in the most interesting of ways, might I add. I was wondering if he would turn up in this fic or not. Excellent work, as always! Keep it up!

Man, this chapter rocked. It made me go back and read the story again, and re-realize how fantabulous the concept is. One question though--in chapter 1 the man talking to Sesshoumaru said that Sango failed at her last mission, which I'm assuming was the mission to kill Naraku. But then Sango said that they were intended to fail to show the rest of the Brotherhood that it was a bad idea to try to off Naraku (at least, that's what I got out of it). On the other hand, if the man from chapter 1 was expendable, he might know only the cover story. Am I right? I really want to know what Sesshoumaru's position is in all of this! Does he want to kill Kouga? And if so, why? (I'm sticking in a guess that it has something to do with helping out Inuyasha after Sess threatened to disown him). Can't wait for the next chapter.

Nicely done! It's good to get some insight about Sango's past. My compliments on the end as well--a very, very Kouga thing to say, and a nice way to lighten the mood a bit after such a dark chapter. Excellent work. Please, update soon!

~Wow~ I love this story! It's refreshingly dark without being over the top. The descriptions, especially from the last chapter, with the whole 'hatchery and gestation chamber' remind of scenes from Huxley's "Brave New World," one of my favorite books. This story feels like a darker and more twisted take on the novel, so please continue with this loveliness!

Yay, an update! You're really on a roll lately! I'm a bit confused about Kagura's role in all this, at this point, but I'm sure I'll figure it all out. Great job, I'm anxious to see more!

Gah! You can't leave it there! This is wonderful work, by the way, and I'm so glad to see two quick updates. You seem to have a real knack for the AU type plot. Great job! Please, please update soon, I have to know what happens!!