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by Xakana

person ISC
schedule September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damnit all... I always read these types of stories then I walk around with this big-ass goofy grin on my face for at least two days... ^_^ People must think I'm smoking something. hehe, I love this! ^_^ I personally think they should end up together, they're lovely! This was awesome! They're awesome! You're awesome! WE ARE ALL AWESOME!!! ^_^




Awesome.
person Snowfall
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are such a good lemon writer. At least no one died in this one! hehehe I sure am enjoying reading all of your fics.

Snowfall
person MeLaiya
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaawww that was so cute
person Ionopachys
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was great. I'd love to see more, but that was just about perfect as is.
person Anon
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aww! that was great! good job!
person Onyxlight
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Bravo my good fiction writer... I loved it I hope you do a sequel in the near future!!