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for Intended Mate

by penpaninu

person Sarah
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
MORE MORE MORE
person Syko
schedule September 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Wonderful work! Keep them coming!!!

~Syko
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I can't stand that evil, no good, shit eating, son of a bitch, Sesshoumaru!!! Before, I only disliked him slightly. Now I really hate the prick. Sorry if I'm using such harsh language, but the way you wrote him made me really loathe that baka youkai jerk-off. (calm, rant over) Ok, great chapter as always, I really like what you are doing and I can't wait to read more. Just so you know I stayed up kinda late to read this and I have to get up at the ass crack of dawn to go to work. You can tell I'm tired cuz I'm being a bigger potty mouth than I should be. Anyways, write on and make Inuyasha better. I can't wait to see how he's gonna rip his dumbass brother a new one. (I hope, please make Sesshy suffer)

Ja ne!!
person evileye
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi I just started reading your story and i must say that its intense romantic elements have really touched me(especially when inuyasha cries his heart out to kagome after his confrontation with kikyo.) I never liked sesshoumaru(sp?) , as a matter of fact i utterly despise that pompous ass and i see that you have written him to be a classic egoistic,evil, cunning bastard. How could someone try or in this case force his dead brother's wife to marry him?! And plz i beg of u not to include rape. After such a beautiful story rape would surely make my heart bleed.
P.S- keep up the excellent work! You r without a doubt one of my favourite authors.
---------evileye
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always, VERY enjoyable....

Sesshy-sama...you bastard! He has absolutely no shame, lol.
Trying to press up on a pregnant woman. Even worse...he's
willing to force himself on a woman who doesn't want him.
Are you that desperate Fluffy? Surely you jest...

InuYasha...my poor little hanyou. I feel so bad for him & Kouga
hobbling around like that. Then to know that he holds her bag
and cries at night...geez that broke my heart. :Sighs:

This fic has really turned into so much more than I expected.
Ar first it was cute and oh so fluffy (down boy!), but then it
morphed into this wild ass story. Lovely!

I hope InuYasha can get himself together before that jerk marks
Kags. I'm still shocked that he would entertain the thought of
killing the baby. Sesshomaru just smacks of 'creepy fuck!'

5 stars as always, Chica! Keep writing!!
person romantiq
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
again ..reallllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy goooooooooooooooooooooodddddddddddd iiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiillllllllllllllloooooooooovvvvvvvvvvvvvvveeeeeeeeeddddddddddddddddd iiiiiiiiitttttttttttttttttttt!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1*squeels* lolawesome awesome awesome !!!!!! how long till the next chapter !!!?????????i no its gonna be good !!!!!! buhby
person Jimmy42
schedule September 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story and it is well written and it flows pretty good from chapter to chapter. But Kagome and Inyuasha have to get back to each other they mates for gods sake and she's pregnant with his child. So make it close but have Kagome get a way some how or Inyuasha get there. Update soon.
person kokoro
schedule September 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the other wolf's name Hakkaku.
i don't see sess as a rapist, but whatever floats your boat. inu better wake soon!
person romantiq
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i just cant say enuf how good this is !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=)although u did scare me in chapter 11!!!!!!!!!!!!!!=)lol
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Arigatou, arigatou, arigatou!! I take back everything I said, you had me really worried for a while. I really like where things are going but you are a cruel person for doing that to a sensitive soul like me. Anyways, keep writing. I'm actually gonna be late to class cuz I stayed a little late at the house to read this chappie.

Ja ne!!