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for Intended Mate

by penpaninu

person InuGrrrl
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I didn't get to read this when it was pposted...so i'm leaving two separate
reviews...heh. Good show! But i am still DISGUSTED with Sesshy-sama.
Trying to take advantage of horny preggos, lol.

INUYASHA!!!! He's better...still not 100% obviously...but at least Kouga is &
everyone's ready for a fight. I don't think this chap was short at all...

Bitchin' show as always chica!
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:OMG:OMG:OMG:OMG:OMG:

First news of the day: My b/f gave me an
Ipod Nano today...omg it's SO rocks!!! Just
had to share!! Now my review...

Tears actually came to my eyes when I read
this. Sesshomaru actually RAPED her. I was
so mad. Poor InuYasha...the worst part was
that he FELT it. Just wretched...

But he's in the courtyard now & it's on n'
poppin! That BASTARD FLUFFY! I hope
Inu beats the cowboy shit outta him...
Slaps the taste right outta his mouth! lol

I hope Inu can see kagome...I know that
cunt fluffy will try to lock her away. To
think..he actually had to get someone to
mask her with his scent...um...I think
that's a CLEAR sign that it ain't meant to
be. Buy a fucking clue!!

As always, Brilliant show & I know the
next chap will hawt as all get out!
person chio
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow....excelent job. Please continue yout fic is very interesting..I am eating my nails nervously. Please update soon.
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
(insert slew of very profane curses in 4 languages directed towards Sesshy here) If I were Kagome I would have jumped inot a vat of bleach after something like what Sesshy did to her. Anyways, I loved this chapter, you are doing an excellent job and as always, I want more!!!

Ja ne!! ^_^
person romantiq
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awesome like always !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!i loved it !!!!!!!!cant wait till chapter 16 !!!!!!!!!!!!!:)
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There isn't enough bleach on the planet to wash that off!!! (insert even worse curses) I hope InnuYasha cuts Sesshy's thing off and rams it down his throat!!! I can't wait for the fight scene, Sesshy must go down like the cowardly prick he is!! Don't worry about me, I'll be ok, I just really get into stuff I read, and only if its really good! ~_^

Ja ne!! ^_^
person Chio
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Really you were really mean......Buuuuuuuuaaaaahh!!!!!!!...But It was necesary. Poor Kagome. But Sesshie didn´t obtain what he wanted. Update soon!!!!!!!!!!!
person InuSango
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you for another good chapter. But I can't stand that Bastard Sessy anymore. Please stop torturing Kagome anymore. Also I don't understand what Kagome really thinks. It seems like she still resists Sessy's approach but becomes weaker and weaker. Sometimes she even attracted by fucking Sessy. I hate it. Poor Inu. Anyway, this is really well written. Please post next one soon. I wanna see Inu kick Sessy's ass in next chap.
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
EVIL MOTHER FUCKING JERK-OFF!!!! I hate Sesshy so damn much right now it's not funny!! Kudos on a great chapter!! I can't stand that creep planting his nasty lips on poor Kagome! Anyways, I'm beginning to take this too seriously, but that's cuz you write really well. I can't wait to read more.

Ja ne!!
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always...MUCH fun!

Poor Inu & Kouga...they're really going through it.
Especially Inu, who can still hear Kags. AWWWW!

Sesshy-sama...you low down dirty dog, lol. I still
can't get over his desperate ass. SHE DON'T WANT
YOU..DAYUM! Looking fwd to th next chappie. I
just know shit's about to hit the fan!

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