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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Damn, you better be damned right this isn't the end yet. But still, it doesn't sound so resolute like you think. I can see how you ended it is very reasonable. Naraku and Kikyo are dead, Sango and Miroku are to be wed, Kagome and Inuyasha are together and soon to be parents. Everyone finally gets their happy ending and with our imaginations, we should think the best of it. But, I still see why you want to continue it. You want to be able to describe how Sango, And Miroku are wed together in the fuedal era by Kagome. Hell, I'd love to see how Inuyasha copes with the Doctor's office, not to mention know what their Baby's personality is like, especially a name. It'd be a cool twist if Sango and Miroku had a baby too.. xD.... There's never any good fics about that D=.. Well, With that said, I'll leave you. Wether you choose to end the story in the next chapter or change your mind. Not to mention continue it for another 2931236,91318731.. etc... Chapters.. Most of us probably think this is a great story. :) especiallymekthanks
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! you really out did yourself with this past chapter! Although I like fluffy, I was amazed at the way you used his character, you kept him in character while making him do something I could never see happening, which is something you definitely have to care to do. You are an awesome writer and I can't wait until chapter 19!!
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October 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Poor Kagome, I hope things get a lot better for her and InuYasha. I wish I had a guy that would love me like InuYasha loves Kagome. (sighs) Anyways, again, great chapter, it shows your really care about the characters and who they are. As for Sesshy, the guy got off easy, but oh well, at least he'll live to get his butt kicked by InuYasha again if he tries to hurt Kagome again.
Ja ne! ^_^
Ja ne! ^_^
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This again a great chapter, and eventhough I would have preffered more pain to have been inflicted on Sesshy, I am satisfied that justice has been served. The bleach is back under the sink, and I will save the cursing for another day. This was extremely well written, I can't seem to say that enough, and I love the way Inuyasha transformed, I totally did not see that one comming. I just hope little Rin doesn't regret having saved that baka's life.
Ja ne!
Ja ne!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
::bows head loyaly:: I am honored you put me on your honored list! ^_^
I loved it! Many, many, many bows for your work! Keep up the great work!
~Syko
I loved it! Many, many, many bows for your work! Keep up the great work!
~Syko
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great I laugh I cry, I love it!
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Much as I hate to see any fic end (even though this one isn't quite over yet), I think that this came out perfect. Although there is always room for a sequel (after all, Kagome is still pregnant, and as the Purity series proves, the next generation can be as interesting as the first). Although I am riteously (sp???) enraged at the Sess/Kag scene, I guess it is kinda essential, and may have some after effects later. As before mentioned, perfectly done, and I hope you continue writing- both to finish this story, and future stories as well.
(also, I usually review every other chapter or so- this is because I only have access to a computer every few days or so. If it's adds at all to your ego, I always check your sotry first for updates!)
(also, I usually review every other chapter or so- this is because I only have access to a computer every few days or so. If it's adds at all to your ego, I always check your sotry first for updates!)
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story! Keep it up ^^
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
aaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwww how sweet !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!*squeels* although i wouldve personallyspilled his guts 4 it its stil so cuteeeeee !!!!1 lolawesom awesome awesome !!!!!!!!!!!cant w8 till chapter 18 !!!!!!!!!!!! im soo anxios to read it !! its so good !!! lol gotta go buhby
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October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOOT! IT WAS OVER BEFORE IT BEGAN....GOTTA LOVE IT!
So the Inu-lords heard Kagome's call and aided InuYasha.
How bootiful is that! Sesshomaru...
YOU GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!!
LOL! He really caught hell that time. He got what he deserves.
The rape scene...let me just say what Sess did is not far fetched
and fits the story. He didn't feel like he was commiting "rape."
(Even if that IS what he did.) He thought he was making her his
mate and she'd LEARN to love him later...lol. So don't worry about
it. Anything forceful or dominant seems to be "rape" by some
standards. In THIS case, was it? Yep, but it fit.
End For Now (heh)
So the Inu-lords heard Kagome's call and aided InuYasha.
How bootiful is that! Sesshomaru...
YOU GOT KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!!
LOL! He really caught hell that time. He got what he deserves.
The rape scene...let me just say what Sess did is not far fetched
and fits the story. He didn't feel like he was commiting "rape."
(Even if that IS what he did.) He thought he was making her his
mate and she'd LEARN to love him later...lol. So don't worry about
it. Anything forceful or dominant seems to be "rape" by some
standards. In THIS case, was it? Yep, but it fit.
End For Now (heh)