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for Intended Mate

by penpaninu

person kegome
schedule October 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
KEEP GOING THIS IS THE BEST STORY I HAVE EVER READ IN MY LIFE UP DATE MORE THIS IS GETTING SO GOOD AND SO CLOSE TO THE BEST PART I CAN FELL IT MAKE IT MUCH LONGER THE STORY I LOVE IT MORE THE ENYTHING PLEASE UP DATE SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOONNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
person Inuyouki!
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have a new email : inuyoukiskye@yahoo.com
person Inuyouki!
schedule October 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi! Daijoubu? Hope your are recouperating from your cold! Drink some hot limeade with honey it will make you feel better. (thats better than inu-youki medicine of boiled livers and herbs!) I liked chapter 21. It's cool , it shows a side alot of authors dont bother to write about. The everyday behavior of the Hanyou and Kagome is cool to read about as well as Miroku and Sango. I enjoy well written stories with attention to detail, domo arigato yet again for doing just that.
person kegome
schedule October 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
PLAESE UP DATE I WANT TO NOW WHAT HAPPINSS AND START MAKING IT SEXYER AND HOTTER THEN BEFOR
schedule October 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I hadn't reviewed your last chapter, but I had midterms and stuff so, no time to read fun stuff. Anyways, great job on the both chapters, and I'm so glad things are beginning to look up for our heroes. As for Sesshy, I still want his head on a pike, but that's just my humble opinion. Ok, I guess that's all I have to say, but as always keep up the great work and I'll be here to review and love what you do.

Ja ne!! ^_^
person hanyou_swimmer
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
YAY!! Fluffy and Rin!!! They must end up together! In all honesty, even though he raped Kagome I feel bad for fluffy. All he wanted to do was love her, of course, not realizing that it was because she was an older version of rin. oh well, it's too late for all of this analysis crap. I really did enjoy this update! Thank you for the Miroku/Sango wedding/Lemon, but I still think that they have to kids, and lots of them!!! As do Inuyasha and Kagome!! Whats going to happen to poor Shippo? Well, until next update... ja ne!
person Syko
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A very good chapter, get well soon!
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:AWWWWW SESSHY-SAMA! GIVE THAT GIRL WHAT SHE WANTS!:

Sesshomaru is such a dick, heh. Let Rin grow up and love you...
you & i both know she's the best you'll ever get. No one will ever
be that sprung for ya! Glad to see him whipping ass too...did
those chumps really think they could take him? Um...y'all KNOW
y'all ain't no InuYasha, so back the FUCK up. ^_^

Sango & Miro..gettin' it on! WOOT! Even though for some reason
their coupling always weirds me out a bit (even tho i've written
such things). I'm such an Inu/Kag face! Speaking of....

Isn't it cute? Our hanyou & ningen are already acting like an old
married couple! Quit NAGGING Ka-go-me. Let the hanyou drink!

Shippo....I feel sorry for him. He's starting to feel lonesome. I
hope they all stay together..at least for his sake.

As always...bloody good show! You continue to cover all the bases
and ya just gotta love it! (Shimmies around the house)

End for...this minute! heh

person Inoyouki!
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oi! Penpaninu-chan, as always a good chapter arigato. Hope you feel better from your cold, get well soon!
person awwinuyasha
schedule October 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
im new to dis site n disz the 1st story/review ive read/posted (?)
i jus wna say ... WHY DID U MAKE SESSHOMARU RAPE KAGOMEEE?! >__<"
*gone sumwhere to cRy*

lOl .. xx tC cnt wait fOr next chapteR uR sOo taLenteD =D

p.S .. umm .. i 4got wat i was gna say .. oh weLLz

*pOp*!