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for Intended Mate

by penpaninu

person nina
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOW SA-WEEEET !! i REEEALLY SMiLED !! :D i DNO Y PPL LiKE U ARE HiDiNG` iN HERE . U SHUD B OUT DER MAKiN` BOOKz FOR PEOPLE LiKE ME !! LOLzz xx REALLY ENJOYED iT ^__^

xXx SHOWiN` LOVE .. BAKiN` COOKiEz xXx
person Syko
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I Loved It! although, Im sad that it had to end, but it was the best story I have read so far in my life. Im also glad that the pup had InuYasha's ears! So cute to picture! I LOVED IT! Thank you for writing a great, gripping story! ::bows::

Tails and Whiskers,
~Syko
person a lost soul
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your story so much, I do believe it was the best story I read. I also really hope you write a sequel <<
person Anon
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Thank you.
person DL69
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i cant see it now -inuyasha running around kagome's bed room trying to get dressed only to fall over or something- LOL

I really love this story and you ended it beautifuly, but there is a problem it is just that YOU ENDED IT!!!!!! NOOOOOOO

you so so so HAVE TO write a sequeal to this story, i want to hear about S/M's baby and about what they and shippo has to say
PLEASE PLEASE WRITE A SEQUAL!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person hanyou_swimmer
schedule October 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What a great ending! Personally I don't feel that you made the rape same event he least bit funny, or not serious. Rape is a terrible thing and I looked at it like you were approaching it from a very mature perspective. True, you didn't go to far into her recovery, but, being as she was happy to find Inuyasha alive it was understandable. Plus, I do believe that one of her biggest worries would be that Inuyasha wouldn't want her anymore.

I like how you approached the whole sesshy/rin relationship. I also find it ironic that he mentioned that Kagome reminded him of Rin, being one of the reasons he liked her. And still he refuses to admit that he waiting for rin to mature. (past chapter, can't remember which one! hehehe)

I would like to read a sequel, or at least an epilogue. I think it would help to put a concrete ending to the story! While until next time! ja ne!

~Hanyou_swimmer
person Syko
schedule October 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Im glad you are feeling better~ Keep the chapters comming! I cant wait to read more.

~Tails and Whiskers,
Syko
person Muem
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
iz there gonna b a sessy/rin pairing??? PLZ!!! but other than that- i love it!
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
As always, great chapter. I do enjoy the calmness of most stories after great events such as the ones here. I just wish I had a cute loving guy to carry me around like Inuyasha. (sighs) Anyways, I can't wait to see how you plan to end this. The only complaint I have is not about this story but about the new look of the site, I liked it better the other way.

Ja ne!
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Penny!

Great chap as per usual! Where shall I start my rant.....?
Gotcha! I don't have one! Okay, I lied...

Sesshy-sama..AWWW, he let Rin snuggle with him.
As soon as she's of age you better tap that thang
Sess-poo. Lord knows, you need some-damn-body!
And geez...would it kill ya to cook your food? There's
a fire n' everything....

Inu & Kags...how cute. But seriously Kago...STOP WITH
THE DAMN SITS! The man...er...hanyou...takes care of
you. Carries your bloated self everywhere. Puts on SHOES
for Kami's sake!! The least you can do is make sure he
doesn't eat dirt! P.S. Inu...licking your plate is NOT cool
dude. You don't have to listen but...

Sango & Miro...a little praying exterminator on the way.
Kawaii! It'll wear monk's robes and throw boomerangs!

Grandpa...nobody wants your damn tea. AIGHT?!
Mama...french toast is better than waffles.

Last but not least...Angels hat?! GO CHICAGO!!!!
lol.....
Good show Chica...I'm ready for the next!!