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for Intended Mate

by penpaninu

person lbvnn
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
how could you kill inuyasha in !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
person marissa
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ewwwwwwwwwwww, did you make that up. the mating thing sounds kind of nasty!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like your story so far, i hope it turns out good!!!!!!!!
person Sasha
schedule November 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
your story is good, and so is the sequel so far.

person inu_geri
schedule October 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved it. It was wonderfully well written and great. I read it entirely in one day.so it definately held my attention. I was saddened about Sesshoumaru , but I am glad he was not killed and has come to realize that Ris is the one for him. I hope you will make atleast onw ( or 2 or 3or 4) sequals to this story. lots'o'love
person ~The Cridic~
schedule October 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i am astonished at how long your story on the internet is i would nomaly think that a story this long would be boaring because of the lack of intrest in it but this story was one of the best so far good for you.
schedule October 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful end to a wonderful story. Thanks for taking me and all of the other readers on a great ride. I laughed, I cried, I raged, and I got a little turned on. ^_^ I definatelly have to say, this is one of the best fan fics I have ever read.

Ja ne! ^_^
person INUYOUKI!
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi Penpaninu-chan, *bows*
Although i will mis reading your updates to this well thought out story.....Domo Arigato for an awsome ending. The pup arriving was a excellent way to wrap up and as always you took care on the details even thinking up an original name for the sprout. I will be looking forward to other stories from you and I would be honored to hear from you via e-mail . I also have a story I have worked on maybe we can share ideas.


person INUYOUKI!
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oi Penpaninu-chan, *senshu*
Although i will mis reading your updates to this well thought out story.....Domo Arigato for an awsome ending. The pup arriving was a excellent way to wrap up and as always you took care on the details even thinking up an original name for the sprout. I will be looking forward to other stories from you and I would be honored to hear from you via e-mail . I also have a story I have worked on maybe we can share ideas.


Oite goshujin saimu,
Inuyouki! (skye)
person peachgirl2112
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
best story ever! I wish you didn't have to end it. DO A SEQUAL!
person InuGrrrl
schedule October 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Penny.....it's The End...for now...for always...forever.
Bravo Missy! You completed it and it rocked the house!
Regardless of what anyone else thinks...here comes my
last insane review full of jokes that only you get lol.

Sesshy....I'm glad you finally see the damn light! You
ain't gettin' no younger dude. You got some sweet meat
there and all ya gotta do is wait for it to age....like CHEESE.

Miroku? Sango? Kaede? Kouga? Um...Where'd you go?

Grandpa...you know your ass don't need all those boxes
moved! And in the tradition of the Simpsons when the
Ramones guest starred..."You old bastard."

Mama...there's a real world outside of the kitchen. I swear
there is. It's just a matter of putting one foot in front of the
other. Take my hand...C'mon, it's okay...I'll show you...

Souta. Get a job and a new hat cuz the angels got...
KNOCKED THE FUCK OUT!

Hojo. Two words... MOVE ON. And take Kagome's friends
with you. InuYasha & I agree that they're useless.

Dr. Sato...you must have grown tired of living to even
ENTERTAIN THE THOUGHT of touching that baby's ears.

InuGrrrl: Tell em' Shippo.
Shippo: Idiot.

InuYasha and Kagome...
What can I say? You guys did it all. You finally admitted
after a BILLION years that you were in love. You beat
the fuck outta Naraku then mated, Kags got kidnapped,
InuYasha died, Sesshomaru ...ahem...took it there,
InuYasha became a gigantic dog & whipped the shit
outta him, Kags got knocked up, then married and
convinced Inu to live in the wrong era, banged in a
chair in the middle of the kitchen with Jiji outside
and finally there's a baby. Dayum.

No stone was left unturned. The only thing missing is...
Wait. THERE IS NOTHING MISSING! Bloody great romp
Penny. It was awesome and quite fun. Should there be
a sequel? Good Q...there are places you can take it..
or not take it. But if you do make one, I'll be there to
leave my mark. Wink!