rate_review Reviews

I decided to review to tell you not to listen to Anon. If you want to write these stories as one shots, then you have every right to. You're the author, not any of us. Keep up with the ONE SHOTS. I like them.

Nice read, somewhat short but still very nice. As I said, it was on the short side, I know it was a one-shot but I think the reader could've gotten into the story a bit more if it was fleshed out with a bit more detail. Characterization was also nicely done, but some of the speech was off. For example, I remember Shippo saying something like he'd avenge Kagome if InuYasha hurt her. Well, yeah he'd go after Inu if he hurt Kagome but I doubt he'd use the word avenge. It's just little things like that, that took away from the story itself. Not a lot know but it was noticeable - at least it was to me.

In the end however it was a really nice read and I enjoyed it!