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for Intended Mate

by penpaninu

person FayeMegan
schedule September 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
horray for Maison Ikkoku! That manga is so aweosme, I'm on the last two volumes, and I have the anime series that I haven't started yet! I've also been reading Fushigi Yugi, I'm gettin the anime soon! horray. Great job on this chapter!
person sarah
schedule September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really and truly love this story... and i think Inuyasha is a bit of a softie... but its SOOOO cute! Keep up the good work and keep updating!
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I've enjoyed this story quite a bit.
Well done.
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OK this is good update soon
person Anon
schedule September 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You write some really good stories. I've really been enjoying this. You keep the flow going, but don't skip things or rush the story. Good job. I like how you are very good about keeping up with your stories, I never get the feeling that you're going to abandon your stories half thru. Keep writing, you have a talent. Thank you for sharing.
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 10, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awwww! Kawaii! She's preggers....
Sesshomaru wants kags....Kami, something wicked this way comes!
person SapphireSaber
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very nice and lemony fresh fic. It was also well written and very tasteful. I can't wait to read more. Yay for giving poor little Shippou something to do, that cute kit deserves it. But I do have one question, what does "anata" mean?

Ja ne! ^_^
person zabchan
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*thumbs up*

nice little lemony ending for us miroku and sango lovers. a little contrived of an ending though...she wakes up and is automatically OK with him taking advantage of her when she's drunk? i know you just wanted to wrap those two up neatly and not get detailed but some logic and in characterness might have been nice on sango's part.

oh well, i got my mir/san bit i should just be happy with that. ^^
person flrsblue
schedule September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i really like this story it's nice. i hope you continue on with it and post more chapters soon.
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sweet!

That was a very sweet & romantic lemon. Well done.
Poor Sesshy-sama...I felt so bad for him.

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