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for Intended Mate

by penpaninu

person frani1375
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. I can't believe that Sesshomaru would take Kagome like that! Does he really think that she would forget about Inuyasha, even if he was dead, and stay with him? I just hope that she puts him in his place and tells him off! Anyway, great story! Please update soon.
person Kirah
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I knew he wasn't dead... I knew it... but you still had me worried.
Sesshomuru better not do anything... I will kill him if he does. Why did Kagura have to die? This story has become so sad... So addictive, but so sad.
Please, please write more. I can't think of anything else that could be said that doesn't go without saying. Just onegai, ongeai write more.
person romantiq
schedule September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that is soooooooooooooooooooo good plz right more !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!ur a really good writer !!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!dont stop writing i beg u !!!!!!=)
person a lost soul
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I loved your stoy alot, even though I thought the ending was very sad.
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
:RUNS UP & DOWN THE HOUSE SCREAMING:

Woot! As if you could ever disappoint.....
LOVED IT! And this is not just talk...but
that was so fucking creative. I've never
read a resurrection like that before. I'm
in love with the description of Inu's robe.
I could just picture him looking so
bootiful. :Sighs happily: So stubborn he
is! So gorgeous, so maddening, so HAWT!
:Goes into InuYasha induced stupor:

Sesshomaru...you bastard! He actually
had balls that hung low enough to demand
Inu's scent be washed off her. Tell me
Sesshy-"sama", how would you wipe the
SMELL OF INU OFF HIS PUP?! Or was the
plan to drown it?! Can ya tell I'm pissed?

What happened to Kouga's legs? I know
it's not likely, but I wonder if Inu will be
a little outwardly sweeter to his friends
since they did so much for him. Oh I
forgot to say this last time...

Kikyou; Another one bites the dust! heh

As always, brilliant job. I'm QUITE ready
for the next chap, BUT don't feel rushed.
The best work comes from a relaxed mind.
You RAWK chica!
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THE BEST AND THE WORST!!!!

OMG...what are you DOING to me?!
First off..that battle was OFF THE CHAIN.
It was extremely well written...I mean you
left no stone unturned, and hell if I wasn't
shocked all the way through!!!

Kagura...I felt so bad for her. I so wanted
Sesshy to realize he liked her or something.
For her & Kohaku to die that way...and then
get devoured. I'm speechless.

Second: I love the way you used the diamond
power. I don't see too many people tear thru
the manga the way you do. NYCE.

Third...INUYASHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
How COULD you?! HOW? I am so devastated.
Words can't describe it. Well fucking done
because I NEVER saw that coming. InuYasha
dying wasn't even a thought in my head. That
baka, Kagome. How could she NOT wish him
back?! Makes me wanna kick her in her back.

Fourth..purifying Naraku. I love how you did
it. I didn't expect him to try and absorb her.
That's deep, lol. Kouga...poor chi-chi. I feel
so sorry for him. Will he ever walk again?

Fifth...and you know I gotta leave the best for
last. SESSHOMARU. Why that piece of dung!
Here I was hoping & praying he would help
InuYasha with Tenseiga..that bastard. How
could he hit Shippou like that? Then just take
Kagome?! She hasn't even had time to mourn!
But more so..she's a fucking baka. I still can't
believe she didn't wish him back. Anyhoo...
Sesshomaru is a real chump. I'm so pissed at
him. GRRRR

Excellent Chica. Seriously. You OUTDID yourself.
I've been reading this since you started, and you
have really taken it places that I, for one never
saw it going. Excellent read & You BETTER write
more soon & calm my youkai. It's screaming for
Sesshomaru's head! LOL
person InuGrrrl
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
NICE & LONG...WOOT!

Okay first: You are absolutely right. InuYasha is a prince.
How anyone can NOT see him as one is puzzling. He is
Inu No Taisho's son ne? Was Izayoi not a princess? That
gives him royal lineage. Well there ya have it - in a neat
lil' package too! ^_^

Second: Love the way you're pulling everything together.
Love the whole "Kagome-woman", I think it's SO cute.
I'm hopelessly hentai, so I vote for another lemon :P
Even though it may not be appropriate timing. But I can
SO see Inu saying "c'mon Kags...just a quickie!" lol

Last: Kouga-Kun. OMG...I felt so sad, so bad for him!
Well done!! The way Inu kinda let him get his shit off,
being the bigger man & all...then the way he said bye
to everyone, even Inu. Loved it. Thought it was perfect.

And no, Penpaninu. I bow low to you! You've given me
a great damn time with this fic & I can't wait for the
next chap as well as your new stuff. You're definitely
on my faves list.

Ja Ne,
InuGrrrl
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
DON'T KILL INUYASHA!!! (crying, really) I hate sad endings, please don't kill him, poor Kagome and the baby. I really love your story but why did you have to do that? Get Sesshy to bring him back!! This isn't fair. :'(
schedule September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oohh, I can't wait to see the big battle, i love epic battles. Again, great chapter and a great that you are tying up all the loose ends, some authors forget a lot of stuff and leave things hanging at the end. Anyways, update soon and lets see this thing end well, I hope.

Ja ne!! ^_^
schedule September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FYI: SapphireBlade/Saber are both me. ^_^ I just forgot my real screen name, I'm a ditz that way. Anyway, I enjoyed this chapter very much and of course I can't wait to read more. Great idea with the tents. ~_o

Ja ne!