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Not sure if anyone else told you or if you even check reviews for this story but Hiku could in a way be a nick name for him, his name is Hakkaku, and to be honest I figured that that's what it was just you shortening his name. I read at one point you would like reviewers to leave an email so I'll leave mine, oh and I'm loving the story. mammawolf247365@yahoo.com 

I just read a lot of stories and i liked yours but I think it is a little OOC having sesshomoru rape kagome thou i have read meny that have that i will say i like your story even thou that sean is thair and i respect your motives but though i do like what you did with koga he is more likely to be a rapist he also let his pack on rins village and they killed rin and sess stopes them from eating her and kills them and brings her back later he has kohaku with him and she is dies again when she gose in the mado with sess his mother brings her back when sess can not you can only bring someone back once with tensega but his mother wornes that if rin dies one more time she can not come back and she is to have a choice when she is older to be with him or the humans as he gives her gifts keg calls him big brother ha ha ha   

Inuyasha's mom was a hime (princess) as well he is royal on both sides he was rased in a Castle by his mom till he was 5 and his grandfather would not tern himout till he was old enough to take care of himself but then he was alown in the woods till he was 150 when he met kikyo and she pined him to the tree for 50 years

I just love your Story. How you have Wrote it. Everything screams amazing and good. I cried when InuYasha died. Ugh! that was so said. But OMG that Battle was amazing. I would have so watched it if it was Done as an Episodes or movie.

I have to say I really loved your FF I have read a few InuYasha FF and yours by for is the best. When Inuyasha dies i scream high holy hell and tweeted to my friends on twitter that i was screaming at the computer and wated to turn it off but something told me to keep reading and when I saw what you did to InuYasha bring him back I like freaking cried. I love the way your right and am very happy you wrote. i hope you write something Inu new soon, But I Loved your Story. Keep Writing!

OMG!! You killed Inuyasha!!! *Dies* Now!!! I Loved this story and I wanted them to end up being together in the end and not his older brother. I Liked Cried but still!!! No!!! But really goo story so far. I thought she was going to use the jewel to bring back her fallen comrads. you get like a A+ so far minus the Inuyasha dying part. I hope he is Alive!

holy crap. you make me so jealous! PLEAZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZE keep writting new stories!!!!!

Good story just some flaws. Like in chapter seven you state that Kagome mother is Ni chans daughter, but in the manga it states that only by marriage are they related. He moved in with her after her husband died his son. Also where are you at in the story.Because their journey nearing the end was nearly 2 years of traveling and Kagome was in high school by then not still in middle school. I am pretty sure that is also stated in the Manga.when you refer to japan don't you mean Sengiku Jidai seeing as it didn't get named Japan til later? i have just finished reading it your writing style is grand , but like i said previously thier were flaws. Tho they were not in grammar as much as they were in research. I do believe you did a great job and maybe if you ever think about writing that squeal you could have Inuyasha and Sess become a family like they should. I mean he can only call him a half breed for so long seeing as he carries their fathers blood more then he cares to admit.Keep writing i tell you.


~~Sieg

I just got finished reading this fic, I loved it. I would really like to know what could happen with sesshie and rin though. Thanks for writing.

you know i liked this story i just had one small problem.....there was a little to much sex going on. being the big perv that i am i never thought i would say that. now i know sex in a story is the same as sex in life,(for me anyways)to much of it and it's no longer a treat. well other then that i really enjoyed it but wished fluffy didn't turn out to be a rappest.