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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE IT!!!!!!!!!! Please write more. your such a good writer! it's the best i've read for quite a while now!!! PLEEEAAAASSSSS WRITE MORE!
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September 14, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL! that was cute.
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yes i love you!... sooo update soon i guess
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Holy crap! Get a beta! For the love of the English language and all her entirety. GET. A. BETA.
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
UPdate Now
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
... horrible
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was sweet and funny.. sequal maybe???
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
the story is neat. but thr grammer is lacking . try a beta reader.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
What the hell? That's probably the crappiest story I've ever read. Ever hear of the word 'grammer' I think the only way people will read this is if they like laughing at your pathetic attempt at writing.
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September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sooo does that mean its only one chapter? you could have some very interesting things happen with that game... soo yea... i liked it you should add another chapter... or someting like that