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October 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
you need a spell check and maybe a beta... nice idea but you have no substance in this....
there are too many mistakes that cannot be passed.
there are too many mistakes that cannot be passed.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters? Can the pairing be Sess, Kagome, and Inuyasha please?
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Is this a inu/kag
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September 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really good! I hope you can continue it as soon as you can.
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please hury and update very good
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey! Your story doesn't suck, k. But as your other reviewer says, it could use a little work...capitals at beginning of sentences...periods...and maybe not so much dialogue...I am very interested to see where you are going with this...keep writing!!!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story doesn't suck, the plot idea is good. Capitalize your sentences and the word 'I'. Give some details on what certain people are doing, and watch your spelling and grammar. Maybe you should try getting a beta reader who can help you with that?
Otherwise, I do like this plot. :)
Otherwise, I do like this plot. :)
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Your story is good, but it needs work. Everyone else that reviewed this is right. You need to capitalize certain words, like the word 'I' and the first word of a sentence. Also, use some punctuation. I noticed that alot of your sentences don't have a period in them. This is not a flame. I am just trying to help you.