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And actually, I think I might agree with other reviewers regarding how quickly Kagome's friends were to abandon her. That seems a little too swift and unsubstantiated. I wonder though, since Kikyo was taken in so quickly as a replacement, did she have anything to do with it, like brainwashing perhaps? Don't know! Can't wait to find out!

Very good story. I can't believe the way the gang treated Kagome. Are Inutaisho and Kagome going to get together? I hope so. Please update as soon as you can.

WOW. Really like it so far. Please update soon. would really like to see what happens next.

I am really enjoing your story so far. I would like to point out in chapter 4 that you had written.

He blinked a few times and pulled his fur thingy closer.

This is how I would of wrote the sentence. He blinked a few times and pulled the fur cloak closer to himself. However, this is my own personal opinion. You are very vivid writer, you have pulled me in from the beggining and I will continue to read whenever you update. The point I am trying to make is when you write thingy it is not very discriptive. What is a thingy? A thingy could be anything. I dont want to sound like I am being mean, because I am not. Just wanted to help another author.

Thank You, I look forward to the next chapter.
Chanda

So the great demon lord has been weakend from the revival. Just how weak is he? Is he only weak in Naraku's castle? Great story so far.

This is an interesting story. I had never seen a plot like this before. Would love to see what happens next. Please update, it's really good.

I really like this a lot! I don't see anything truly wrong with it other than a few spelling errors. I am curious as to why you had Sango and Miroku agree with Inu Yasha in their own gentle way. I hope that you'll clear this up as the story progresses. I would also like more details on the fight between Naraku and Inu-Papa and exactly how he came to be locked in the dungeon with Kagome. I know, lots of questions. I'm thoroughly overjoyed that there are getting to be more and more Inutaisho/Kagome fics out there. I think Taisho-kun deserves some recognition too, he did, after all, sire two very hott sons. Oh, on a final note, please tell me Inu Yasha is going to be handed his ass on a platter by either Kagome or Daddy Dearest. If at all possible, let me know when you update. My email address is directly above. I'm sitting on the edge of my seat, hoping you update quickly.

Ja ne!

Nefra

Interesting, please write more

its spelt glance not glanze

I liked this first chapter, Inuyasha was all cold towards her. Sango and Miroku took Inuyasha's side but still seem to want whats best for Kagome, Sango mentioning her starting a family and Miroku asking if she'll be okay. SO what was Shippo's take on it??

As much as I liked the first chapter, I could only give three stars due to the spelling mistakes.