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October 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please explain how the phrase "Dona Nobis Pacem" has anything at all do to with your story.
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October 6, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have been reading your story. It is very interesting. It appears that english may not be your native language. The beta groups have brought in some traslators that may be able to help you. Fics written in other languages are welcome. Check with the beta group. They can be a lot of help. Perhaps you could translate fics into your language for readers in other countries!
Snowfall
Snowfall
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October 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very interest please update soon
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AHHHH...that was evil!!!such a short chapter and with a mysterious ending. I can't wait for you to update.
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September 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Not to bad of a chapter, though you jumped around a bit. I'm guessing you are trying to set the stage for a major scene or plot to unveil. What's with the scar or scratch on Kagome's back. Don't tell me the dog princess can turn invisible.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This story is really very good, and I like your plot. Just a suggestion, however. You really need to check your spelling, especially in the most recent chapter. Some of the misspellings make a few of your sentences either mean something you were not intending, or are difficult to determine what you were trying to say.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow i love were this is going i absolutleylove this pairing exspecialy nefra's story but i just dont think sango and miroku would sit back and let her win so easily and what ever happened to kagomes clothes you need to mention her state of dress alittle more and how she feels about it itll make it a bit more ... real. also i doubt a village of dog DEMONS would be verry ecepting of kagome one last thing our dear lord fluffy (sesshomaru) is im prety sure lord of the westenland wich means so was daddy but its your story you can have him rule just a village if you want just thought i d let you know please update soon ther arnt enough kag and inutasho stories out there im glad i found this one
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
There are several spelling mistakes. Such as the female demoness, it is heir not hire.
Also you have several characters speaking in ways that are out of character form them.
Also you have several characters speaking in ways that are out of character form them.
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow this is such a cool story and will you please update soon!!! preet please #puppy eyes#
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September 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome atory keep writing ^*