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This is a great story so far! Intaisho/Kagome pairings are so hard to come by and are rarely any good, yours is an exception. This story is very interesting and the last chapter just left me wanting even more. Please update again soon!:)

Your story is really good please keep the updates up. I can tell this is going to be a really go story.

please let me know when you have done the next chapters ok i love this story so far it is so cool.

Ah, so Kagome is a Mary Sue in the fic? Lovely. No really.

Fine story very original. So is Kagome a kami? Guess this makes her much more special then Kikyo. Is she going to have to be cut for the other wing to release...hope not painful. I have my own set of characters with wings. Their wings come out at around a certain age but after they do the first breaking of the skin, they have kind of a glowing mercury mark on their back in the shape of wings. It helps them to take the wings in or let them out without pain. It's good to have. You can use that if you want too, I'm fair, people get ideas anywhere it's only realy insecure people that say I though of this it's all mine GRRRRRR. You can e-mail me if you want more idea's it's nice to have another writer to write to.

Wow!! well that was unexpected...Kags is an angel. So who cut off the other wing??? or is still coming out of her body and that is why she is bleeding so much??? What trigerred her transformation? Does she have more power now that she has a new form? Is she an avenging angel who will annihilate Naraku since he is pure evil? I CANT WAIT TO SEE WHAT YOU WRITE NEXT.

I'm happy that you have not given up on this fic. After so long of not having an update I was afraid you had decided to pass it up. I do hope you update soon. I am also happy that you are striving to improve your writing style. Trust me, you are good already but you will get better as time passes. I have come a long way myself since I wrote my first fic and I have major plans to edit and revamp all of my older fics. This story has held my attention since the beginning and, again, I hope you update soon. I will look for that update and new chapters.

Ja ne!

Nefra

P.S. If you need anymore inspiring pictures let me know. I got a ton of them. LOL!

Please continue!!!

Love the story! I've come to adore this pairing but there are hardly any stories.
Will Inutaisho find out that it was Kagome who pulled Tetsuiga (is that right? *shrugs*)
out? I'd love to see his reaction/ hear his thoughts. Never the less I look forward to the next chapter!
Domo Arigato, for your thought and effort.

Oh, please update soon. I know schooling takes priority over fanfiction but I do hope to see more from you very soon. Keep up the wonderful work. I'm completely hooked on this story.

Ja ne!

Nefra