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for Dona Nobis Pacem

by jibril

person badkitty
schedule November 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awww this chapter was too short, I want more ~pouts~. Oh well at least I got a mental image of Touga ans Sesshy shirtless and sweaty, mmmmm. I'm also glad that you adressed the Kikyo being pregnant thing, kinda made me think of Van Helsing. She could be pregnant and the baby just not be alive. Can't wait for another chapter.
person Artemis
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a kick ass story ^^- I love it
person Lush in lace
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
mary sue means self insertion, Nice story by the way.
person T
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
good chapter
person Cordal
schedule November 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
odd pairing...but nicely done! i luv it ^_^ can't wait 'til the next chap
person chanda
schedule November 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Okay I didnt give up on you, I have been really busy writing myself. So I am up to chapter 10 now and it has been really good. I normaly dont read this pairing, however seeing the third movie.... OMG wtf was I thinking... LOL. Anyway I will update more.

Thanxs
Chanda
person sendosha
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry but please tell, how can a dead person be pregnant? You´re forgetting that Kikyou´s body is made from clay, soil and ash. If Inuyasha would enter her she would shatter into many pieces. I don´t understand why so many authors write that her body is like a normal body with flesh and blood just dead.
person Anon
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Inutaishou's real name is SUPPOSED to be Touga. When they were making the movie soundtrack for "Tenka Hadou no Ken", the 3rd movie, one of the tracks was going to be 'Touga's theme'. Later they changed it to 'Father's theme.' Also, it was the name the producers gave him (in actuality he was called "Touga-ou", but that just means King Touga) while they were making the story board. For some reason, they never used that name in the movie, so Inu no Taishou is still considered un-named. I don't know where Sugimi came from, I think people mistranslated when Myouga said "Chichi-gimi" in Movie 2. Anyway, I know it'll be a pain to change the name since you've written 11 chapters, but just thought you should know. ^-^" I love your story.

-Hikari
person chanda
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey sorry I havent reviewed in a while... This has been very interesting, I look forward for more...
person MemoriesVoid
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story, it's the first time I'm reading an Inu no taisho/Kagome pairing. Usually, I'm a fan of Sess/Kag... Anyways, it's nice to see something different and I'll be looking forward to your next update. ^_^