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for Dona Nobis Pacem

by jibril

person Katzztar
schedule September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ah, Shippo is still loyal to Kagome, as is Kirara. I like the idea of Kirara leaving Sango (at least for now) to help Shippo look for the Woman that Inuyasha, Sango and Miroku betrayed.

Even if Sango and Miroku still cared for Kagome, the way they turned her away was still a betrayal. I can't wait for those two to see they are guilty as Inuyasha in betraying Kagome.
person karen
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is interesting. I can't wait to see what happens.
person kikiz
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh woww this chap its really great i love it please i wanna see the next chap and i hope you made miroku sango inu ..... and the others pay for what they done to the poor kag well see ya


hugs !!


^__^ i wanna seee the next chapp !!
person Lady Kio-tye
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You are most welcome! I was glad to help. I can't wait until you finish this sorry. You are welcome to email me if I can be of anymore help!
person heather
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story please update soon
person demonqueen
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story so far. I take it this will be a Kagome/Inustashio pairing?! I kind of felt that you had Kagome's friends turn on her rather quickly because of one mistake and be equally quick to take in Kikyo; considering all of her faults. It's kind of hard to believe that Shippo would abandon his "mother" and stay with the others. I realize that maybe this was the way to have your story progress to get to the meeting between Inustashio and Kagome, but somehow I think maybe there could have been a better way to go about it. Anyway, it's your story and it will be interesting to see how it goes.
person cammi
schedule September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
nice pairing there are only afew of these inutaisho is quite cute ur doin a bang up job plz update soon
person silvermoon134521
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
graet story i love kag/inutashio parings even thoug their r so few update soon plz
person Kougalover123
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a great idea for a story i love Inutaisho/Kagome pairings but their aren't enough good stories with them out there please keep updating asap. :0)