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for Dona Nobis Pacem

by jibril

schedule March 2, 2016 at 12:00 AM
OMGG THIS IS AWESOME CANT WAIT TO READ MORE
person Lunaticneko
schedule August 28, 2013 at 12:00 AM
I love this fic and can't wait to see what happens. Hopefully she can save him
person Serafina
schedule November 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Im impressed by this story so far, and its very chaotic and makes me want to read more. Its a very talented story.
person FAL
schedule October 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Plz Update! This is sooo good and I can't wait for the next chapter
person ptbear
schedule September 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Awesome. Update soon. Can't wait to see if Kagome can save Tougo, if Kikyou is pregant and what they do to her for helping Naraku.
person Grandma18
schedule September 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really good story. I was upset on how Inuyasha's gang treated Kagome after they last fought with Naraku, but they were looking out for her well-being in a indirect way. I'm glad Touga killed Naraka. Naraku needed to die.And I hope that stupid bitch Kara dies for attempting to kill Kagome. Please don't kill Touga. Please update soon I want to know what happens next!
person bunnyb
schedule July 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
finally been waiting a very llllllllllllllllllooooooooooooooooooonnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnggggggggggggg time update soon
person Vyncent
schedule May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is quite good. Grammar and spelling need work, but still this story has got a great plot and is well presented. I see that you are considing shortening your chapters, but please reconsider. Longer chapter make for better reading, and make the story more enjoyable. Short chapters maybe quick to write, but usually mean that the reader just gets into the story and then it stops.
person mari
schedule February 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it ROCKS !!!!!!
I CANT WAIT FOR MORE!!!!! UPDATE IT SOON !!!!!!!!
person badkitty
schedule January 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I hate evil cliffies! At least Narakus dead. Update soon so I don't spend too much time obsessing over what's going to happen to Inutashio/Touga and kagome.