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Excellent You write eloquently - your writing evokes a vision in my mind, a vision of three straight, separate lines flowing along a coordinate graph, then all of a sudden, breaking into flailing, trigonometric and quadratic patterns, intersecting with one another at various, strategic points yet driving forward all the while.
Also, the formatting is highly-attractive, as each line ends almost-always on a letter instead of a space, making the paragraphs appear neat, clean, and uniformly-square, instead of rough and jagged. It just looks good! Either you measured the exact position of each individual character with painstaking precision and accuracy, or you pulled of some kickass HTML coding. Whatever you did, you obviously knew what you were doing while you were doing it, and I would love to know how to do it, too.
The story itself was great, too, by the way.
Thank you thank you. I just loved this. oooo so yummy Miroku. Poor houshi really got his skirts in a twist, didn't he...