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for Gone Swimmin'

by Quickening

person sara
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ddddddddddrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrrroooooooooooooooooooooooooolllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll. omg. that was so sos. yummy. what i would give to have been kagome. the best one-shot i have evr read.
person penpaninu
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
GREAT STORY! well done and well written....GREAT!
person inufan625
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Who cares about plot honestly... But seriously this was really cute and I thoroughly enjoyed reading it.

It was too funny and I laughed out loud at Kagome's thoughts...'Nice dick. Can I touch it' priceless.

Anyway you have a nice style and I hope you will find yourself further inspired. I will look forward to it. I think this could be a great starting place for a series of connected one shots.
person Blayze
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Quickening? As in 'Broken'? I hope so, cause that'd mean you didn't drop off the face of the earth and that you're still writing :)

Good story. :D I was a little disappointed, though. I opened this fic partially to see the fisting promised in the summary. ;)

Any plans for any anti-rosary fics? ;)
person lizzy
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good One shot. I LOVED IT! Best Lemon I've read in a long long looong time.
person drake220
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that bottom AN was hysterical. I loved this! Hysterical with a really hot sex scene and an adorable ending! Great job!!

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