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I'm surprised I never read this, but I s'pose this was during my internet hiatus.

It was fantastic, definitely got my blood 'pumping'. If you catch my drift. I'll be checking your profile for more! Keep up the good work, and all that good stuffs.

Great job! Cute and sexy. Enjoyed it very much!

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

What can I say, I loved this one shot, I got the plot, Inuyasha naked, heat wave, cool water, Inuyasha is naked, I would want to be in this story too, bring on the heat wave if I can get a moment with Inuyasha!__!

Anyway, it was well written and the angst was really realistic and good. I like how Inuyasha thoroughlly embarrassed still stood with his arms crossed over his chest stating to Kagome the obvious attraction he had toward her. I just loved the whole innocent things they experienced together before they became aware of the "making love" thing. It reminds me sort of of my first time. *blushes*

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Loved it! What a goggle and WAFF fest. LOVED the handjob, heh.
Nicely done!

If fan art is what inspired this fic, we simply must send you more lovely art of Inuyasha. SERIOUSLY! This is a truly quality piece that manages to put a new spin on 'the bath scenario'. I enjoy the way both Kagome and Inuyasha managed to stay in character; most authors give Inuyasha a silver tongue to match that hair of his. He was both cocky and self-conscious which is EXACTLY the way he is in the series. And except for a short crying spell (which was necessary to advance the plot), Kagome wasn't a simpering schoolgirl. She got angry more often than sad, and THAT is very her. Not to mention that I could fully see her using that precise 'twisted logic' to justify oggling Inuyasha.

Simply gorgeous. I really hope you get inspired by this couple again. You write for them incredibly well.

very cute. very well written as well. i loved it! you really nailed down inu and kag, i think. so many fics have them all gushy when they first see eachother instead of the actual character reactions. i think, honestly, that if it was more of a hentai show, this is how it would go down. inu forced into admiting stuff and still being his slick self about it and kagome simply red as a tomatoe throughout the whole thing. props for a well written one shot!!!

this totally rocked, no joke. The characters acted like in the manga, the thought of sweaty Inuyasha (gurgle). I loved it! fantasy is all about experiencing the moment... you don;t always need a huge story to get feelings and fantasies across. You really, really need to keep writing.

extremely yummy. I just love the way you write..... fabu!

I liked it!!!