rate_review Reviews

I loved the story, but it didn't seem like that was the end of the story. Well, anyway, I loved the story, it was well written. Keep written and I'll definitely will be readin em. Bye.

Holy Moley! You can't write something that good and not make another chapter. Not to mince words with ya, but you did leave it cliffhanger-ish.

Thats was so hot, I love it! Kudos girl!

I know that I got the privelage of reading a lot of this as it was in creation, but the overall effect of it is stunning. I do so love how this played out. Kagome and Hiei make one of the hottest couples to read and whether or not you decide to take this to a full-length fic, it will remain one of my favorite pieces. I love how well you kept them both in character and let some of the tender side we all know Hiei has shine through.

Brilliantly done, my friend.

hey....that was an awesome story...i wish you had finished it...but none the less...it was kool...

Mmm...Very sexy, I'm all hot and bothered. *Grins* Hope to read more from you soon.

That was really good. I love your fics. And if you wanted to continue this one, I can tell it would be really great.

ooOooooh, tension. lol. I looove it...of course, all the other work of yours I read I seem to have a bias for as well...but meh, what can you do. You have a wicked imagination and excellent writing skills. So keep it up! Oh yeah, are you going to continue all your other stories as well? It seemes like such a big load for you. But I hope you do because they're damn good! So good luck and don't get too frazzled!

This is amazing and so is the rest of your story's. Great job keep it up.

Ah...I can't thank you enough for writing this. There's like...no one updating anything, so I feel so...deprived! I know, I haven't updated either, *sigh* I need to just sit down and write, but it's kind of hard to do when there's college to go to...*sigh again* This one shot was so damn amazing, I don't even know where to begin. Kagome and Hiei are just...MADE FOR EACH OTHER!! :) I love the way you started out this story and the lemon was awesome, and I loved every word of it. The dragon was a nice touch, and him branding her...of sorts, was unexpected and very pleasing. Thank you for writing this! It was an absolute joy to read!!
Sayuri-chan