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Another great and amazing chapter I know you meant for this to be a one shot but I am very happy with the continuation of this. I like how Hiei was being a hentai and not turning around when she dressed and Kagome being the naughty minx and teasing him was great. I'm glad that the heat is still up between them and really why wouldn't it he's hot:) I'm very happy with the way you wrote Kuwabara he is a very caring and self sacrificing person. Espically in the begining episodes he cares a great deal for others and durning the dark tornament he was the first one to figure out the masked fighter was Genkai, even before Kurama. Yes he is also kind of a goof ball but so is Yusuke and heck even Hiei for that matter after all Hiei was the one who said 'hot' in the forbiden room.

I just found this story and read both chapters. LOL, for a one shot deal - this story has the potential to turn into a full fledged novel. I love the part you gave the dragon and hope to see more of it in future chapters. I DO assume there will be future chapters??? *hint hint* Anyways, thanks for writing another great story and can't wait for you to update.

i love that you decided to continue this it is great please update again soon.

^^^i like it! update soon!

Yes, you're turning it into a full story. Kind of hard to say no when reviewers are asking you to add more chapters isn't it. You are truelly the Queen *bows and hands you a cookie* Was an excellent chapter but I expected no less from you. Keep up the good work!

Do yuo have *any* idea how happy I am that you decided to continue this? Or how positively pleased I am with how you have portrayed everyone? I love how you didn't completely break down Kuwabara into a total baka. True, he may be a little slow on the uptake sometimes, but he still doesn't seem to get the credit he deserves. And I adore the fact that you steered clear of making Yusuke too much like Inuyasha. I see that comparison far too often and while they do indeed have a few traits in common, I think Yusuke is more of a man and a gentleman than Inuyasha is. I even had to read through the first chapter again...you know I want another one soon ;)

hey, i love your story! it's so...awesome! no, wait, awesome isn't even close to what this story is! it's amazing! it's cool! plz update! there are so little HieiKag stories out there, and I don't get to read a lot of fanfiction...so plz update!

This is the best and I mean THE BEST crossover I ever read so far. And believe me I've real it all. The characterizations are excellent. Of course I'm not surprised. Your the BEST! I'm very happy that you decided to make it a full story.

I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?

I loved it! YOu should really think about making a sequel or more chapters.