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Great chapter! It´s amazing how Hiei can hold himself back if he must even during his heat cycle. Hope for a little bit action in the next chapter. The way how you described the relationship between Hiei and Mukuro was really good. Looking forward for the next chapter.

I like the way that this story is progessing. Is Kagome going to be Pregnant? What is going to happen between Hiei and Kagome? I can't wait to read more to find out what happens.

Damn! Another masterpiece. How do you do it. I really like the Hiei/Kag pairing and Yusuke/Kag pairing. I just think that they look really good together. Anyway, Hiei sure did it this time. I can't imagine how pissed off Inuyasha is gonna be. I'm kinda thinking that Kag shouldn't be pregnant. I think it would allow them to develop their feelings for each other natually without the forced issue of her being pregnant and Hiei staying out of obligation. Also, what a great touch with the dragon wrapping itself around her. I bet it has to do with the jewel and wanting to help protect her. The dragon is really old and probably is aware of Miduriko (sp) and stuff. Man, you always get me thinking of tons of senerios with your writing. You leave the door open for so many possibilities that I drive myself crazy trying to figure out where you are going to go next. Nicely done!

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

Nice touch to this story. LOL, I can't wait to find out if Kagome actually is preggers and how the dragon is going to play out in all this. Please update soon.

Yay! Another wonderful chapter my friend. So much going on and so many things to wait on yet. Update soon :)

You truely are the goddess of crossovers. This story is so awesome and it only has two chapters!! Woot ha! *jumps around happily* I love Hiei/Kags stories and I can't wait to see what happens next. I understand you story conflicts, and will remain patient until I can be saited by your lovely writing. Update when you can!
Sayuri-chan~

YEAH!!!! *Does a happy dance* You Updated. That makes me happy. And it is a fabulous chapter, which makes me even happier. Oh and thanks for the pictures They're YUMMY!

Thank you for updating. I love this story. I like the plot idea and were its going. Is praying for more lemon next chapter acceptable?
' Ox King proceeds to get down on knees and prays for lemons to drop from the sky'.

another great chapter. hiei is so loyal and proud. i can't wait to see how inuyasha responds to this he is going to freak. please update again soon.