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Excellent! I'm really loving this tory and i cant wait to read more!

I sure hope you have more for us soon -- this is a GREAT story! Hiei/Kagome pairings are my favorite. You've definitely set the stage for a lot more to come, and i am so looking forward to the upcoming repercussions. Please, please, please, write more soon!

I read your 'rant' to use your own words and didn't find it to be unreasonable at all. I do have to confess to being one of the (expletive deleted) who do not review very often if at all. I just don't know what to say and feel very stupid reviewing over and over again to different people whose writing makes mine look like a brain damaged three year old. 'It's great!' and 'I like it.'

I mean I am not brain dead and while I am reading I can see mispellings and plot holes, etc. but by the time I get to the end of a chapter or story (unless it is glaring and obvious)I have forgotten the specifics. And I am too lazy or enthralled by the story to stop reading and write it down.

That doesn't mean that I only notice negative things, I just don't know what to say for the most part.

So here goes nothing. I find your stories to be enthralling, mind gripping and dinner has been late on more than one occasion when I am reading it.(I told hubby to suck it up and get over it)They are well plotted and I wish I had half your talent with words I have found very, very few of the glaring and painful errors that sometimes make fanfiction out right sickening to read, you actually can spell and use words that you know the meaning of and don't just guess (sorry pet peeve).

I don't know your age, but your characters are mature and have depth while staying true to themselves. Which leads me to believe that you are not a whiny twelve-year old using established characters as a thinly veiled self-insertion fic of what they'd do if they had the character in question's talent, power, etc. (sorry another pet peeve)
The characters flow smoothly and react naturally with no stilted unnatural dialogue that interrupts the story and pulls the reader in and capturing their attention.

That's about everything I can think of to say other than I hope to see more of your writing in the future. Oh and the bane of writers everywhere Update soon...please?

Whoa. Some very hot encounters in there. I like. See, I'm reduced to shorter speech.
I'm also intrigued by the potential results from the collar, the baby and Naraku. Oh the things that could happen. I also like the different pairing between Kurama and Shizuru. That's not commonly seen, and I'm enjoying the two of them dancing around each other in their own ways while still showing some interest. That will come to fruition soon, I'm sure. Can barely stand to wait to see what happens next.

this is amazing please keep going.....

~A~

YAY. I like it, no I LOVE IT! :) Continue please I want to see the results of the story. This is the best hiei/kagome story. Congraduations on your Nomination.

Thanks for the update!!! This is one of my fav YYH/IY pairing storys

I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?

congradulations on being nominated. i really enjoyed the story and im happy that 3 chappies had been added since the last time i had read. plz keep up the good work and update soon

ja ne till next time

I love this story and all of the others. You have a wonderful talent. I was wondering, what ever happen to the yusuke/kagome/kurama story that you wrote. I think it the tiltle was Only Me or something like that. I loved that story..I luv Hiei/Kagome stories too.. To bad kagome isn't having twins. The thought of a bunch of little Hieis running around.That would be funny..mmmm,On second though maybe not. Anyways keep up the good work. ^_^