rate_review Reviews

I would have to agree with either pairing my friend Ryu mentioned. Though, as I am sure she would agree, if you make it a Hiei/Kagome/Yusuke pairing...you should make it Toushin Yusuke...he is sooo much sexier when he is all demon :)

I think I like where this is going...then again, I love crossovers. The basic story line seems good so far. As far as the spelling and grammar go, I would love to help you out if you want. I have been looking for a story to Beta.

Excellent first chapter, and I have to agree with Ryu chan, you have less mistakes than some of the people who put up stories. Don't worry about it, and it won't be that hard to iron out the mistakes anyway, there really weren't that many. As for pairings, I know you don't want to do a threesome, so I suggest Hiei/Kagome. Kurama is too calm for the fire tempered miko, and Hiei is just as complex as she is. :) Well, good luck with your writing, and I can't wait to see what happens next!
Sayuri-chan