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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I thank the hottie should be Hiei ! ! ! !
Good story...
Good story...
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i would like hiei/kag or hiei/kag/kur.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I wouldn't worry much about the spelling issues, you can always find a beta to fix those. Honestly your spelling and grammer is better than alot of people that have English as their native language. My hat is off to you. Interesting first chapter, it seems that Yusuke is going to learn to watch his mouth real quick. I look forward to reading the next chapter, still thinking that a Hiei/Kag/Yusuke triangle would work well, if Yusuke can get his mouth under control. Good chapter, please update soon.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hehehehehe. this is a great story. i vote for hiei/yusuke/kagome pairing. it would be a very yummy story. keep up the great work.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey, I love this so far, it's really good! Hiei/Kagome/Kurama!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey, good start keep it going your headed in the right direction....and keep kag on yusuke's ass...thats my fave type of fanfics...yay!!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I have always liked the Kag/Kur/Hiei parings. If you like the idea I would love if you to use it.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love Triangles, I'd say either Hiei/Kag/Kur or Hiei/Kag/Yusuke. I look forward to reading the first chapter.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I agree with Ryukotsusei, it should definately be a Hiei/Kagome/Youske. fic. i mean there are very few pairing's of that in fanfics at all now that i think of it i haven't really seen any like that pairing. but its all up to you.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey great first chapter.... hope to read more soon...Later