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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HOLY F****** TENTECALES THAT WAS AMAZING KEEP IT UP AND IF ANYONE SAYS BAD THEIR MENTALLY UNSTABLE
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September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
why only "R" for the InuxKag-sequel? I want to know about the 3 weeks without family *grins*.... every detail
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Sorry I didn't write a review until now. I loved your story and I'm going to read the Inu/Kag sequel.
I just don't like Sango and Inuyasha as a couple. It bothers me for some reason.
But I'll be looking out for the Inu/Kag sequel!
I just don't like Sango and Inuyasha as a couple. It bothers me for some reason.
But I'll be looking out for the Inu/Kag sequel!
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I admit...I'm jealous of the Sango factor. I just...i don't accept them as a couple.
(Ducks book being thrown by author) I love the way you write, but I just...not Sango! lol
Can't wait for the Inu/Kags one tho...will we get an awesome lemon?
(Ducks book being thrown by author) I love the way you write, but I just...not Sango! lol
Can't wait for the Inu/Kags one tho...will we get an awesome lemon?
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September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow It really is a piece of art.... you surely have a lot of talent... could you make a sequel or even better make this into a full-blown-about-20-chapters-story?
I was truly impressed how good this was....
I was truly impressed how good this was....
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
THAT WAS SOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO AMAAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!2 words: ur good. for any flammers i'll give u my super, all-in-1, fantastic fire extinguisher. it comes with a fire blancket, a flame thrower (jus in case u want to throw flames back), and a fire extinguisher (of course). 1,000,000,000,000,000,000,000,000 (dunt ask if this numbah exsists) GOLD STARS!!!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed this on MM. Felt like doing it again...
Excellent work. To me length is not a factor, but
content definitely is and this is a great one. Love
the taboo edge, the kinkiness and the wonderful
lemonade. Hope to see more from you!
Excellent work. To me length is not a factor, but
content definitely is and this is a great one. Love
the taboo edge, the kinkiness and the wonderful
lemonade. Hope to see more from you!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I reviewed this on MM as well, glad to see you are here as well! I'm an author at both sites as well.
I'll put a brief review here as well, since i put the long one on MM:
This fic = Major ass kicking creation
You as an author = A natural talent
You writing more fics = Mandatory, since talent like yours is VERY rare these days, especially on AFF, no offence to other authors but many of the fics here are below average if you ask me. Sure, there are many excellent ones as well but finding them is rather hard... which is why this fic is a jewel that stands out brightly, write more, please.
Who knows, maybe you'll do a sequel to this one as well, since this has all the correct ingredients for a multi-chaptered fic!
I'll put a brief review here as well, since i put the long one on MM:
This fic = Major ass kicking creation
You as an author = A natural talent
You writing more fics = Mandatory, since talent like yours is VERY rare these days, especially on AFF, no offence to other authors but many of the fics here are below average if you ask me. Sure, there are many excellent ones as well but finding them is rather hard... which is why this fic is a jewel that stands out brightly, write more, please.
Who knows, maybe you'll do a sequel to this one as well, since this has all the correct ingredients for a multi-chaptered fic!
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was good. Especially love the hot, steamy lemon. I don't get why people gave you 2 or 3 stars in the beginning. you definitely have to continue this, I mean, they still have almost 3 more weeks alone with each other. Hehe, bring in all the kinkyness: bondage, chocolate sauce, massages, ice, vibrator, studded/ribbed condom, bataken, 69 etc etc. Update soon!
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, you're right; that was a long one shot. very well written and a good amount of plot. considering, you could turn this into a much longer story (not to mention they still have 21 days of bliss ahead of them). tee-hee. very good story! well written and a strong plot. wasn't sure how i felt about them being siblings but it makes sense when thought of, and foster ain't that bad so it's all good! well done, keep it up!