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for Of Shadow & Light

by chevonne

person InuyashaLover20
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ooooh! I love it! It made me want to cry and I almost did! I feel so sorry for poor Kagome. Update when you have time please. I'm giddy with anticipation.
person YoukaiObsessed
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow this is so deep!! The way you portray her sadness over what happened and what is happening is exceptional. That was a twist with the pregnancy. She seems so alone, her family against her decision to keep the baby and wanting to put her away. Great job on this!
person kinky lurker
schedule September 2, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you know, i really like this deep and thoughtful story. you've put so much effort into it and you're doing a great job making it very interesting and engaging. i love this story and i really can't wait to read more from you for this story. i'm very glad that things are going well with you and i hope things keep going okay. i love you baby and you're doing an amazing job!

keep it up and i'll be back for more from you.

love you!
~hanyou-elf
person InuYashaLuver
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
great chapter! please update again soon!
person kinky lurker
schedule September 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey baby! this is a great story! i love it! i can't wait to read the next chapter. it's a rather sad story, but it's really good. it's definitely different, but it's a great story. i love it! i can't wait for more, this is going to be a great story and i can't wait to see the next chapter!

love you baby!
~hanyou-elf
schedule August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
*Huggles Kitty* I am so sorry for your losses!! I know this past year has been a rough one for you!! *Hugs*

My review- I have missed you and your writing. I am so happy to see you are back to writing.--*Gasp-blink-blink* Oh my gawd, I was soo shocked by why happened in this chapter. I'm kinda speechless, and you know I rarely get like that. The descriptions of the clothing and the car were wonderful as always, I could picture everything in mah mind. Dayum that ending was unexpected and sad. I was at the edge of my seat. Hope to see more soon!! *huggles*