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Hey I thought this was really funny you should continue

DAMNIATSUE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I have NO idea what that meant but this story is okay...
but could use a few word and grammer corrections...
and I stopped reading this story after chapter two...because...the thought of Miroku and Kag.'s mom....UGH!
way to creepy for me....

lol kags mom sure is something lol trying to saduce poor miroku lol poor inu still fiting with the cat like this story please update soon

eeer....
could use some spelling corrections but overall ok story

i really like this plot. and the author's notes inbetween are funny. but i didn't exactly know where that author's deranged ranting thing came from......it just interupted the story. it mighta been something funny to put at the very begining before starting the chapter or when the chapter is done. and you need to a little more editing for the spelling of your word. i hope you don't take any of this the wrong way and think i'm mean or something. just think about some of this when you write the next chapter it will make it all the more better. great story so far!
~Courtney

great story so far. please update.

I like the idea of Miroku through the well, but it was a bit hard to follow.

Uhm..... dream sequins? !??? Is that when you fall asleep and little shiny round decorative objects fall out of the sky (tossed by your local fairy dragqueen) and land on your clothes and get stuck in your hair?/ (OMG I'm having a Studio 54 flashback)

sorry, didn't mean to be snarky but that just cracked me up.

yay more plz

poor cat inuyash is sooo paroniod bout it talking lol i cant wait to see how miroku reacts to all the things in kags time i like the story please update soon^^