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for Love That Transcended The Time

by putrikagome

person Anon
schedule August 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
ok, not bad, and this is rude of me, but I gotta tell ya. Where Kagome is now, wen Kikyo was alive, Miroku wasn't even born, ok? His grandfather was tho. ok? ok
person rin.dee
schedule January 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please finish the story.
^_^
person darkjakken
schedule November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello...!! Where are you? I am begging you.....Please...please...update!! How come you leave the story hanging like this :(.....COME BACK NOW!!!!!!!!! I love your stories like crazy.........
person Anon
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was good
person me
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
it is good so far but , ya the evil but, when you wrote '"Ai….ai…We got an angry boyfriend….Chikara!!" '
Ai…ai…A jealous boyfriend…hah?? Why do you want to save her, if you aren't her boyfriend?" Chikara asked wittily.'
'"Ai…ai my lovely woman….Why did you cover your body like that? You have a beautiful body. Let it show…ok? I like it…." Asato walked towards Kagome.'
i think you do not 'ai' means love in japanese and i just thought you should know that cuz it really doesn't sound right
person Anon
schedule November 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i loved it so much i read it all in 1 night
the first and sequeel
person Menomaru
schedule November 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Updaaate, where are you hon?? i missing you story like crazy! :'(
person Anon
schedule October 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
HURRY UR ASS AND MAKE ANOTHER ONE! MAKE INUYASHA TAKE KAGOME AND TELL KIKYO TO FLIP OFF! MWAHAHAHAHA! IMA KIKYO H8R
YOUR LORD AND MASTER,
FOAMY THE SQUIRELL
person Kenji
schedule October 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story. Update soon
person chanda
schedule October 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
LOL, Sorry my bad, I am slowly working on it...LOL