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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey Author here i forgot to mention i dont accept flames but i could use some advise good or bad just no flames and i think those who have read and reviewed....im posting this cause im not sure how to check my reviews hehe silly of me eh? well i will get the next chapter up asap ^_^ thanks again
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
oh come on you need to updatw must find out what happens next
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like this story please update soon ok. thank you
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
For large blocks of text with incorrect paragraph structure and poor grammar, I give it a '2'.
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Nice start...BUT alot of spelling errors and the paragraphs
need to be enforced. Other than that, it's pretty decent.
need to be enforced. Other than that, it's pretty decent.