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March 2, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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June 3, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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April 6, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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July 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
um... you have MAJOR format errors... just thought you should know what you already know
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November 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like that very much but u did mess up a few tims umm on it u kept doing it from inuyashas point of veiw then normal point of veiw u put somthing like i velt her velvity lips against mine she pulled away "kagome" he said in a pain filled voice or summin like that but other wise it was GREAT cant wait 4 the next chapter
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love this story, i hop eyou make inuyasha come to his senses.=)
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September 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I like the general premise of your story. You write well, but it's hard to read your story. The sentences should be sepearted not bunched together. Very difficult to read.
Also, I suggest getting a beta to help with the grammer and spelling. Again, you write very well, but the story needs structure. It can be so much better than it is now. Believe me.
Inuyasha seems to be keeping in character, Kagome is a bit off, but still believable. I am looking forward to reading more of your story.
Also, I suggest getting a beta to help with the grammer and spelling. Again, you write very well, but the story needs structure. It can be so much better than it is now. Believe me.
Inuyasha seems to be keeping in character, Kagome is a bit off, but still believable. I am looking forward to reading more of your story.
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September 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok i reveiwed now will u pleez update thanx peace
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love the story. Can't wait to see what happens next. Hint: go to openoffice.org. It's just as good as Word, if not better. And it's free. I recommend it to everybody.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OO; Nice.. xD