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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love love this story :)
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
tee hee hee, so you're adding it here too? Great, I'm looking forwards to it!!! ^+^
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I just finished the first ten chapters, and I love your story! Your writing style is great, and you did a terrific job building up the sexual tension between Rin and Sesshoumaru. Can't wait for more! ^___^
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
a really quick review.....it really late and I'll finished reading your story tomorrow...I only got to chapter three midway and I got to say...."I LOVE IT!!!!" I was a little shock that Rin was a thief in your story ...but it was for a good cause......I'll write another review later after I get finished reading it.....KEEP IT UP!!!!!!!
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ohh, cliffhanger! That's so cruel! I'm really getting into this story, it's very interesting. Will we get a lemony treat in the next chapter?
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
not bad, some decent writing... surprised you don't get more reviews! ^___^
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August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy.... were those other chaptesr packed with action or what!!!!!! I can't wait until the next chapter.....You got to tell me what novel was this from?????? It way to good not to finish...so please update soon........