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for The Captive Bride

by cyancat

person Jessie
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
WOW!! GOOD CHAPTER!! i never revied but i thought id give it a shot!! on things thou... umm, 7 inches on a man is average, but it's ok, update!! ^=.=^
person babe_galanime
schedule November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
continue plz.
person Anon
schedule November 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Awesome! Awesome! Awesome!!!
person joua
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
FINALLY!!! i tought you were dead. haha sorry. anyway that's so hot. write more....
person Ren
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It was good, wait no..it was GREAT!! But..I thought Rin was a virgin...wasn't she? Then how come she didn't feel pain when Sesshoumaru 'took' her? That's funny...hmm...oh wells, it's your story!! Keep it up!! ^+^
person New Fan
schedule November 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am glad that you have updated. I hope that you can update more often because I really
enjoy this story. Update soon.
person Mmoirai
schedule November 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hi! Great story. You are off to a great start, and I look forward to your next installment. I only saw a few minor gramatical errors, but they didn't bother me. I can't even spell 'gramatical'. Well...that might be right... Anyway, thanks for sharing with us and keep up the great work.
person chesterzerousygirl
schedule November 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i miss this story! what's taking so damn long??? (sorry for being rude)
person Sabrina
schedule November 8, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Please finish the story its great :)
person Rawben
schedule November 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohh! i love this story!! update soon! this is great! yey for lemons!

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