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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like the pairing, but GOOD LORD please cut down on the punctuation. You do not need five million exclamation points in addition to having the word being yelled in all caps. I suggest getting a beta reader, then trying again. The cursing is also over the top - it's like you just learned the word fuck and were eager to show off your new knowledge.
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September 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol, that was cute ;)
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August 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I like your fan fic a lot. I've never read one like this and I like to read ones that are very different. PLEASE update soon.
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Aww... I love it so far! It's pretty good! The reaction from Kouga is just priceless X3 you must continue this story!! ^_^
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August 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i like the love sick puppy he's become... this story is great!!!
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another really cute and sweet chapter. Some of the dialogue is totally out of character, but considering how funny this is, it doesn't matter. Keep up the good work ^_^
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
update soon
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August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was hilarious and I love how you made Inu slap Kagome for touching Kouga. That was classic! Please continue!!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I hope you feel the love! I sure do!
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August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I think its cute the way Kouga is warming up to InuYasha. lol Something bads got to happen so that Kouga can save inu or something *Dreamy smile* Ahhhhhhh how romantic lol...Anyways....Keep up the good work...I love this story so far.
Laura
Laura