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another great chapter! ^_^ i'm really intrigued by ur story. i can't wait to see how everything unrolls. u have talent at writing, hah but i dont think u need me to tell u. anyway great story! i'll be awaiting ur next update! til then, t.c. bye!
lith*

I seriously love this fic, it's well written and original, and incredibly romantic... I am looking forward to future updates, and wish you only well in your writing of it

I have a feeling my reviews will start getting all repetative, because, by the end of the chapters, all I can think is, "Wow...that was...beautiful." ^_^
I loved the 'fight' scene between Sango and Inu. Wow, she really wailed on him...that was kind of funny.

So, awesome chapter and, of course, can't wait for more.

Excellent story, must update soon please!!!!!!!!!!!

Sigh.... This is so good!!!!!! Please update soon!!!!!!!!!!!!

nice chapter once again. it's quite intriging how inuyasha seems to have an obsession with protecting kagome. but i wonder wat it is he exactly wants to protect her from. anyway, i hope you continue with it!!! love this story so far, and i can't wait for your Update!! til then! t.c. ^_^
lith*

this is fabulous! I mean, a really really well concieved, well written and well executed fic. It's a joy to read. Intelligent, sexy, plot AND charac\ter driven. Honestly, this fic is a big enough miracle to be put into the Bible. Great job!!!!! (i'm adding this to my fav. it's that good.) PLEASE update soon!!!

This is very good!!!!!!! It feels warm and fluffy!!! I can't wait to read the next chapter! Please update soon!!!!!!!!

Great, beautiful, fantastic! ^_^

It's irritating, isn't it, when a chapter writes itself? I find, though, that sometimes the best stuff comes from those chapters. Inuyasha seems to know what's going on (he does, doesn't he?), so it makes sense that he would move fast. I think the actual timing of the lemon will depend on how long you plan to make this story, and how much tension you want between them. I'm not sure there was anything I particularly disliked about this chapter. The scene at the orphanage was good -introducing Shippo and mentioning the Thunder Bros- I like how you have incorporated the original story in this. The scene outside Kags' apartment was hot and had me holding my breath.

I would say, so far, great story. I'm really looking forward to seeing how this unfolds. Keep it up!

hahaha... aww poor shippou... hah nice chappy! ^_^ i didn't think they would move so fast.. but hey! i'm not complaining! *grins* anyway!! i'm still lost... so does inuyasha remember kagome from their past life? .. or... eh *is lost* but oh well!! i like this story anyway. excuse my insolence, it's late.. i love where u're taking this story so far, you have a vivid way of writing that just makes everything flow smoothly. update soon, cuz it's getting good!! ^_^ till then! t.c. bye!
Lith*