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hurray!! I love this!! It's a good story and the kag/kouga/inu thing was just great! Also, Miso is hysterical. keep her in play. And if miroku and sango can have more airtime, that'd be great. I think you have the dynamics of their relationship down to a tee and it'd be a shame to not showcase that. great job!!

I'm pretty sure I was laughing through most of this chapter. GREAT scene between Kouga and Inu...loved it. The name calling, the posturing...all so very true to the original story, with a little something extra that gave it a certain uniqueness.

Oh, and I think that Miso is now my new favorite character ^_^ I was giggling so hard at work when I read this, I was getting weird looks from people. Awesome ^_^

As always, can't wait for the next! And don't let school, work, etc. stress you out too much!

A brillant story from a brillant mind!!! I love your work!! I see that you took a wonderful new twist to the relation between Inu and Shippou to a much better and much more appealing level.. THEY talked to each other and understand that they both care for Kagome very much and both want to look out for her... Other writers have Shippou as a child bully to poor Inuyasha with Shippou getting Kagome to abuse the Sit command so he can get his little sick kicks off of it.... and they think it's really cute. (my opinion to how Shippou actsa Bully is a Bully NO MATTER what age)... ( as much as I like Shiipou... He does deliberately provokes Inu into fighting back) Thank you so much for this breeze of fresh air. Did I just rant?? I ranted!! Kami!! Sorry... LOve your story... By the way I was also avidly following and reading your Sachi story --- have you abandoned it for this one? Is it on Hiatus permantly? Is it being worked on? I love that story too very much.... I guess that happens when you find stories that makes you crave reading them.... Please update as you can!!! If you can on both I can't wait for the next installment of Waiting...

heh. It's a temper-off, Inuyasha vs. Kagome!!! Time to rumble... I liked the conversation flow. it was very naturual.

That was so hot!! ^_^

I loved this chapter...almost missed it! But the tension between them is breath-takingly wonderful and every morsel you give us of his past makes my mind race about what is going to happen next.

And hurray for OCD authors! I have the affliction as well. We should start a club ^_^

Can't wait for your next update.

::whistles:: I wonder what all the patrons in the restuaruant thought, looking out the windows and seeing Inu adn Kag practically having sex on the porch! hehehe! DAMN but that scene was hot!!! H.O.T hot hot hot!!!!! Very well described. Also, your OC's are great- realistic and enjoyable.

This is an awesome story, deserving of about one million positive reviews... sorry I can't give you that, all I can give you is this one very appreciative review. This story defines sexual tension, but there is a great romantic undertone to it that makes it more than just a (fantastic) lemon build-up. Those pesky little things like spelling and grammar are taken care of (things that some fanfic writers seem to think unimportant) and I am genuinely, nail bitingly curious where you are going to go with this story... I see the possibilities going in so many directions.

You are a very good writer - I have read both the stories you have up ~ I hope you continue with the other story as well ~ and I see a commanding writing style, wonderful characterization, and interesting possibilities as related to plot a common theme in both stories. I hope you keep with the writing and updating, and even maybe turn your thoughts outside of fanfiction into more original works... you obviously have the talent for it.

Best Wishes
Bathory

Sango is one protective friend!! hehehe! good for her! I love how you described Inu's thought process. it was very well done.

Holy ****!! Now that was interesting. The summary was really good and that's what intrigued me to read the prologue and boy was I shocked! I'm going to read the next chapter now if you don't mind...I got to find out what happens!

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!! I ABSOLUTELY LOVE IT! It should get more reviews damn it! God I can't wait until the next chapter. I enjoy how you are unfolding this story. I can't wait until Inuyasha and Kagome finally get togather. I feel bad for Inu though, but Kagome is a woman with dignity and she's right....you can't give yourself to someone you don't really know. Poor Inu. And don't beat yourself up...you have amazing citrus skills. I wish I could write like you. I can't even write a kissing scene! Anyway...a job well done. Pat yourself on the back.