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This chapter had some truly great lines. My fav was probably "Sometimes the darkness gave more than the light." That adn the entire scene with Shippou adn Kaede in thier PJs? I was hysterically laughting. great job as usual.

hahahahahaha! im styll laughing after chapter 11. that was funny! LOL! love ur story and thank u blackberry(sp?) for editing it. I absolutely without a doubt love ur story. keep writing plz
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You updated, yay! Anyway can't wait to see Kagome in another compromising position with Inu-yasha. And as always great story.

Yes!! Please let this next upcoming chapter be soon. I simply cannot wait. I am so in love with your stories I can't get enough!! I have to say that your talent is right up there with theMaven, and kuronekosama. Two of my most favorite authoress' here at AFF.net. I have to add this story as well as your other story to my Reccomend reading list. You are just pure talent!! I love the excitement I feel when reading your stories and how well you know the charaters. Oh!! I just love. I wish you the best of luck with your schooling and just hope that you have time in your busy schedule to update your stories. And I like the fact that you are a perfectionist because it tells me that you are dedicated to your stories and that is something that I love.

One small question concerning Sesshoumaru. Does he have any sort of feelings for his youg ward Rin? Just wondering because I am also a diehard(sp?) fan of Sesshoumaru and Rin fics. Now I know this story isn't focused on those two but I was just asking. Just my curiosty getting the better of me.

I have to thank you for your wonderful story and how it filled a little extra time I had during my weeked.(Even time I didn't have ^_^)

You are wonderful!! Until next update.

Nire

You updated, I love you!

hello again! well i just completed reading chapters 8 and 9. sorry i couldn't review earlier... but anyway. GREAT JOB!!! .. as usual, i couldn't tear my eyes away from ur story for a second til i finished the entire chapter. i can't wait to see how the whole thing unravels with the alliance.. inuyasha..kagome... etc! it's getting to be a marvelous story!!! i can't wait for ur next update, hope it's soon *crosses fingers* well til then, ttyl t.c. bye!
lith*

an update!! Hurray! I loved Inu's little seizure in the middle of the council- great touch! The rather sexy description of Rin was a hoot and the fact that when Rin mentioned Kohaku's name, Sess got all protective was also a nice, subtle hint of plot developments to come. a really great chapter as usual. update again please!

Really cool story. What does Naraku have to do with Inuyasha? And what about Kagome does he keep thinking? And what about Kilala? You've only mentioned her once. She feels neglected. Good story though, I like the concept. Wasn't Bunzo the tiny little lynx demon though?

~LauReN

i love this story! please keep up the good work!

Hi! I've never reviewed your fic before cause I just found it yesterday, but I LOVE it! Your writing is beautiful and the plot as well as the scenes are very unique. Take your time with the next chappie (I know how hard it is when you rush)! Looking forward to the next!