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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a very good lemon. ::claps:: It wasn't grody and despite the ferocity it was supposed to mean, it seemed romantic. I liked it alot. And this chapter was funny too. What does 'osuwari' mean?
~LauReN
~LauReN
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yes! I got my lemon thank you! But I didn't get my marking, *sob*, oh well hopefully that means another lemon.
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a truly awesome lemon, definitely one of the best I've read. I'm really enjoying this fic, so KEEP IT COMING!
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October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Ok, I just reviewed this fic, and as I was reading through some of the other reviews, one of them mentioned that you are writing Sachi as well! I've been folowing that fic since the first chapter and have kept it in my favs regardless of how long the new chapters take. I LOVE both of these stories. Please continue to take your time and do right by them. Believe me, they are both worth the wait. The only problem is now that I've sampled of one of your lemons, it's gonna be a challenge to wait it out for the next one. OOOHHH, THE ANTICIPATION.
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September 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another incredible chapter and the lemon scene was done just fine. Keep up the good work and update when you have time please.
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September 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
do you know you actually had me nervous that inu was wounded?!?! That's how great that description of kagome's strained nerves and terror was! Brilliant! Love it!
do you write this out chapter by chapter or is it all written adn just being beta'd?
do you write this out chapter by chapter or is it all written adn just being beta'd?
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh thank god! He didn't die!!! Atleast, I think he didn't die. It was the Windscar, right? The giant wave of power? At first, I thought it was spiritual, but then you said that it left grooves in the ground and little of the demon left. So it was like :click: Windscar. You're a very good writer! What about Sachi though? I like that one as well. Keep up the good work! :gives thumbs up:
~LauReN
~LauReN
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The first thing that comes to mind is AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(That's a good thing)
My goodness those last three chapters were awesome as usual. I cannot get enough. I might just go back and read them again in case I missed something. One small question: Does Kagome have the Shikon no Tama in her body? Is this whatever Kaede is sensing in Kagome? Just wondering. I especially loved the part where Shippou created a little diversion to get InuYasha's ice cream (Kawaii!!!^_^). And sorry I didn't reveiw last couple of times but now I'm going to make up for that. Also is Sesshoumaru going to make an appearance again?(Just love the guy)
Hm...
Well I can't think of any other questions I have so I guess I'll end this. I love you work, you are so talented. I wish you the best of luck!!
Until next update!
Nire
My goodness those last three chapters were awesome as usual. I cannot get enough. I might just go back and read them again in case I missed something. One small question: Does Kagome have the Shikon no Tama in her body? Is this whatever Kaede is sensing in Kagome? Just wondering. I especially loved the part where Shippou created a little diversion to get InuYasha's ice cream (Kawaii!!!^_^). And sorry I didn't reveiw last couple of times but now I'm going to make up for that. Also is Sesshoumaru going to make an appearance again?(Just love the guy)
Hm...
Well I can't think of any other questions I have so I guess I'll end this. I love you work, you are so talented. I wish you the best of luck!!
Until next update!
Nire
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September 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
first off, this is not meant to offend you or be mean or anything of the sort. i've seen this story on mediaminer, and your a few chapters ahead there. i can understand that you didn't post this all at once, so as to keep people reading, but since you haven't updated on mediminer recently i was getting concerned that you weren't working on the story. anyways, love the story, definately the best i have ever read.
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September 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
sweetness!! I LOVE THIS STORY!!! I get those weird, happy butterflies whenever I read this! It's just so great! love love love love it!