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for Waiting on a Wish

by Quillwing717

person Marisaiko
schedule January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story!! I hope you will continu, I will be waiting for your updates!! ^^
person E
schedule November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was great!!!! pleas continue!!
person SilentDeath
schedule November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a very nicely written story. I love the plot and your charaters are great! Keep up the good work. I look forward to your next chapter.
person drake220
schedule November 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'll be (un)surprised if you didn't hear my scream of joy when I saw that you updated! It's been too damn long sweetie! aff.net NEEDS story's like this one- well written, great plot and hot sex! I raise a glass in your honor! (can you tell I thought the chapter was amazing? character AND plot development, great lines, romantic and humourous all at once. Praise you!)
oh and it was those great brothers from a few chapters ago. I forget their names but they were fun, weren't they? and the shoutout to Love Hina was well done. It was the leaf bikini's that gave it away...that Keitaro was a lucky lucky boy.
update again quick! I want to see the inu/sess reunion! Will sess immediately sense that Inuyasha has found his One and Only Love? Will Inuyasha try to kill Sess? (yes) Will Kagome get further embarrassed by everyone she knows? (yes). All this and more on the next thrilling installment of WOAW!!!!
person SilverPhoenix21
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love this story! The plot is great and everything. I can't wait until till you update again. Good luck on your project! I have to do one myself.
I hate doing them! :mumbles while throwing books: hehe anyway...
Ash
person lithium88
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I'm glad that you wrote another chapter to add to this great story! i've been following both your stories, this one and sachi and i just have to say you have a very unique way of writing. It's different and it works really well. ^_^ kuddos to the chapter, I'm glad you found.. some inspiration? haha well anyway!! Great job once again and continue the writing! Until your next chapter!! Take care!!
lith*
person Cynbad146
schedule November 21, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Next chapter! Next chapter! I vote for working on the next chapter! You do such wonderful work. The story is progressing very nicely. It surprises me that InuYasha will leave Kagome, as worried as he has been. Yes! I think the story will have more roller coaster rides to it if Kagome is accidently knocked up. My little pea brain is trying to outguess what is going to happen next. I am wondering if Naraku will show his tentacled and slimey face next . . . and what made Sesshoumaru kill the human (Naraku's henchman.) You know we love it when Sesshoumaru loses his temper. ("Must keep control . . . ahhhh, @#*!, you will die!!!!! and I will not break a nail doing it!!!") He is such a show stopper. I have no criticism, just want to say how much I enjoyed the chapter. Yes, you can still write!!!! Thank you, Cynbad146
person Ravi
schedule November 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is an awesome story so far. I can't wait for the next chapter.
person drake220
schedule October 3, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this got unfairly and terribly BURIED under the whole 'you-must-add-a-disclaimer' thing. update it again in a little while and that way all your fans can realize. thank god i went all the way back! but:
this is your FIRST LEMON!?!?!? it's mind blowingly explicit and yet delicate and sensitive. Very tactfully sexy. No crudeness and that fits perfectly into the whole mood of this story. And the ending was hysterical.
person Nire-Neko-sama
schedule October 1, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! That was simply delicious!!! If that is what you consider a first time lemon, then I'd love to read one with more experience. Wow!! That wasn't bad at all. Everything was just right. And how did I know that Kagome's mom knew that InuYahsa was there LoL!! Oh I simply adore this story!! I can't get over how good this is!! I love it!!! You are so talented!! I think your way of writing is gorgeous and that you need not change a thing. And special thanks to Blackberry as well!!

I love it!! I want more!! Can't wait!! ^_____________^

Nire