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for Waiting on a Wish

by Quillwing717

person Nicole
schedule August 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I love the begining of the story so far. Im glad that sango and miroku get along right away so that more of the romantic focus is on kagome and inuyasha. Awsome job please write more soon.
person lithium88
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hello again! great chapter, so inuyasha still has his memory of all of them before? or maybe i'm wrong and just read wat i want to read.. heh.. selective seeing sometimes. anyway... great story! update soon!!! t.c. bye
lith*
person Snowfall
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is a really sweet story. Oh my, Kag's woke up nearly on top of him! And he wouldn't let her go. I like how you are taking this at a nice even pace. Can't wait to find out what the wish was and how it has to do with everything that is happening now. You write well.

Snowfall
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I quite enjoyed it. Very good work and writing style! I would love to see more chapters in the future!
person LauReN
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is REALLY good. I like it alot. Please, please, update more! And please email me when you have. Sometimes, it's hard to track down a sotry you've been reading when new ones come out everyday. Lol. Looking forward to upcoming chapters.

~LauReN
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
interesting. soo...does inu know of what is going on? ...or does he normally just pull scantily clad girls into his arms (not that he wouldn't...hehe). great story, i can't wait to read more about it! very touching opening chapter, had me near tears! very welll written!
person lithium88
schedule August 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
hey there! i love ur story so far! ^_^ i've seen many takes on the inuyasha series where one of the characters makes a wish on the Shikon no Tama to revive the rest of their friends who have fallen at the hand of Naraku. (phew.. long sentence.. hah) .. *ahem* sry.. anyway ur story caught my attention and i can't wait for u update soon!!! this story has potential!! i hope u continue updating!! til then, t.c. bye!! *falls off chair*... d'oh!
lith*
person cu-kid
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow...just...wow. That's all I can say ^_^ Absolutely beautiful. You paint descriptions with such fine detail that I feel like I'm really there, watching the events unfold (how dare you mangle Inu's ear! ^_^ It better grow back). And the emotion in the first chapter...wow ^_^

You are, by far, one of the best authors here. I love your work, am envious of your ability to weave stories that immediately draw me in and keep me hooked. I look forward to your updates on this!