rate_review Reviews

That was so sad and I felt calmless after I read it. you should know the power of your words, the way you can force the readers into feeling and experiencing the same angish as the characters. I think the way you write is better than good, you have talent. Furthermore, you have a great imagination, you know what you want to express, the way you want people to feel when reading... and you just achieve it.
Perfect.
I believe you really have the power of suggestion. The best power a writer can have. Because, believe me, making a reader feel this strongly is not something most professional writers can do.
Be proud of yourself.
Sorry for my poor and pathetic English. I hope I explained myself clearly enough.
VenusOfHeaven.

shiiiit. poor rin, man! ugh! ... *still lookin through your fics for something a lil less... dark*

*Gasp* Dayum that was dark!! *Coos* I really didn't expect that from you!! Wows you shocked me with this one! Good job on this. The story was intense and flowed so beautifully!!

Sorry but that was just not cool at all

Ouch! The pain! I hope your happy now I got to go read something happy! *sob*

*sob, sniffle* You...you killed my Sessy-sama. *boohoohoohoo, waaaaah* That was one dark story. Good job. *wipes tears from eyes* Please be nice to Sessy in the next one. Please?

Snowfall

I guess I should give you a serious review, ne? At first, I thought you were going to simply tell us the story, but you quickly moved right into the action. You wrote it very well, particularly Sesshoumaru and Mirokus's thoughts and feelings. Your description of the killing blow was very detailed. Kudos! But, ew. Hehehe, I like blood and guts anyway. Sess's eyes glazing over, his surprise at Miroku's words, Miroku's conflicting emotions all added up to one ball of confusing emotions. Though it was sad, you left it on a hopeful note. Good job! Um, I'm kinda not into rape, so I can't really do a good job with reviewing there. You did make it seem real though.

Thanks,

Snowfall

when i originally read this it didnt phase me beyond the fact that you hurt sesshy , and i already knew you did that, i just hadnt known to what extent XD
but now that my mind has been able to process it, miroku is downright SCARY! hes the LAST person i'd ever think of to take down Sesshomaru... well besides maybe kirara O_o or shippo XD
anyway you did a splendid job i just wish the light fading from sessh's eyes would quit playing in my mind. its terribly hard to go to work when all i can see and think about is the life slowly fading from my beloved characters' eyes!