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for The First Inuyasha Shorts

by penpaninu

person bob
schedule August 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
awwwwwwwwww!!!!!!!
person Rawben
schedule August 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ohhh.. that was too good! and so cute! but you gotta keep goin! what about when they see each other next?? something like that *definitly* changes a relationship! ;) but it's still a good oneshot if you want to leave it... *sigh*... ;) lol, anyhow, yey for you! it was good! ;)
person Anon
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
You do know that 'ofuda' means prayer scroll or paper charm, right? You have misused the word. An 'ofuda' is what Kagome's grandfather throws at Inuyasha and what Miroku throws to repell demons.

I don't know what you thought it meant but you misused it.