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September 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Interesting you seem to be a decent writer. I like the storys they were intriguing. Keep up your good work.
~~Sieg
~~Sieg
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Thanks for posting so many chapters so far. I really enjoy reading your story!!
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April 14, 2008 at 12:00 AM
check wickipedia... you wrote 'ofuda' one of those charged slips of paper miroku throws at youkai enemies.
# Sentō (銭湯, Sentō), a type of Japanese communal bath house
# Ofuro (お風呂, Ofuro), a type of bathtub commonly used in Japan
# Onsen (温泉, Onsen), a Japanese hot spring traditionally used for public bathing
chapter 1. i guess they both know now, embarrassing for them both.
# Sentō (銭湯, Sentō), a type of Japanese communal bath house
# Ofuro (お風呂, Ofuro), a type of bathtub commonly used in Japan
# Onsen (温泉, Onsen), a Japanese hot spring traditionally used for public bathing
chapter 1. i guess they both know now, embarrassing for them both.
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
That was a great fluffy!! Keep up the good work!!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very good! Sweet, detailed....I like it!
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
Heh...MELIKE! ^_^
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December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you definately need to make this either longer or make a sequel! very good! please continue it!
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
ok, it was good, and i really liked the plot idea, HOWEVER, it would have seemed a tad more plausable had it been a little longer, ands maybe if he didn't have his dream right after she had had hers. but its still good the way it is.
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September 9, 2005 at 12:00 AM
i love your storie! plz update!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
lol! that was hilarious!! you should make a second chapter/ or sequel!
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September 5, 2005 at 12:00 AM
whoa. this is the best fanfic i've read all night.
fluffy, but fluffy with a twist. someohow, NOT having them screw made it that much better of a fanfic. i felt so THERE, i could almost hear inuyasha's gentle breathing and see the way he strained when he dreamed. awesome job.
i can even see inuyasha's "deer in headlights" expression when kagome discovers him beside her. and what a powerful yet simple gesture of kagome's acceptance! (having him sleep beside her, that is.) and one can't help but compare that reaction to what sango would have done if in the same situation with miroku...slapslapslapslap..etc.
very warm and fluffy, but not to the point of gagging, i have nothing but praise! this works as a one-shot but i'd adore it if you'd write more!
fluffy, but fluffy with a twist. someohow, NOT having them screw made it that much better of a fanfic. i felt so THERE, i could almost hear inuyasha's gentle breathing and see the way he strained when he dreamed. awesome job.
i can even see inuyasha's "deer in headlights" expression when kagome discovers him beside her. and what a powerful yet simple gesture of kagome's acceptance! (having him sleep beside her, that is.) and one can't help but compare that reaction to what sango would have done if in the same situation with miroku...slapslapslapslap..etc.
very warm and fluffy, but not to the point of gagging, i have nothing but praise! this works as a one-shot but i'd adore it if you'd write more!