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by lilkoko

person Backlash Wave
schedule September 4, 2005 at 12:00 AM
It's a good start. But what is the pairing for the story. Inuyasha and his sister? Anyway I noticed that there were a few grammer errors but nothing to bad. But update soon would you please.
person Stefanie
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
First off you really need to check your spelling and sentence structure. Secondly this isn't a Sesshomaru/Inuyasha fic, so why is it under the Sess/Inu category? You should move this to a more suitable category.